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Overwhelming sadddddnesss ~
Lord woman, you know how to pull those heartstrings. I love your poem, very sad, such an overwhelming feeling of helplessness comes out.
More Please ... err can ya give me a happy one?
*Smiles* I love your writing, just seems the last few have been soo sad. Of course many could say my last few have been so bad, lol. Love'm gurl. Keep'm coming no matter what the muse says ya need to write. ~ *Grins*
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So many dark visions you share,
in all your verse;
pain, disillusionment, betrayal;
I hear you and hope it is cathartic;
I second RF's sentiments,
for a vision from you of joy.
REALITY
seems to bite sometimes, springtime showers turn to snowmen, and there we stand wondering when .. and how..
-sgp-
I cried
for me it was my dad
the steeples lie I say he is smiling down
they say suicides burn
James
damn......ooops......
but hey...i like this spot here so much i couldn't of said it any better than this:
All those years of Sunday school
let out their final breath
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i'm glad i caught this one......overall nicely done...don
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Having faith doesn't answer all questions....
Believing
Faith is the substance of things hoped for...who ever knows the answer.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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THIS SEEMS TO BE A TRUE STORY
and with common knowledge of pets on freeways on daily basis. TK U MLJ LV NV
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