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Of Dreams and Reality

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by Anonymous

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by Tesshu09/06/05

Oooooh man!

It was a dream?! Great fucking dream, maybe a next chapter where the dream becomes reality?

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by copperbutterfly09/06/05

An Excellent Dream

Ohh, indeed a wonderful dream...Will you tease us with more?

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by Don102809/11/05

Your description is not very good about the taste

of her shit.

Wish you shit lickers would describe the taste and smell for the rest of us

Please

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by David4809/14/05

I just love it

Describe shit-licking? Really hard for a writer who probably never sucked on a womans rectum. Pretty fucking kinky shit! I'm old and over the last 40 years plus can tell you exactly what it tastes like. But why should I tell you? Grow up and find out for yourself children.

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by PapaMike04/07/11

Labia lips?

Labia means lips, so when you say "labia lips," you're saying "lips lips."

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by Ravenswing7702/22/14

Might want to do some rewriting

The implication is that Mike is waiting to be send to Nam. Problem is when you mention a string bikini. The string bikini wasn't INVENTED until after Nam was over and the draft was abolished. Bikinis in the 60s weren't remotely what you think of them today.

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