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Wonderful
God it made me come again and again. I could almost hear her asking him to breed her.
Make a breeding White Machine for the Brothas!
and have her nice wimpy husband work 2 full time jobs to take care of those kids of hers, all of whom have different brothers with big tools that could really satisfy her!
make him say, "Oh, honey, I love sucking you after you've fucked so many real men"!
or, on the other hand, make her all itchy --- and then eventually all sick and ugly --- from the "risk" she's will to take, because such risks about pregnancy and contracting viruses from strangers make sexual activities with her so exciting,,,
in fact, in real life, thousands of men and women are suffering and dying every single day, from this kind of attitude towards sex with strangers and PURPOSEFULLY not take any precautions to JUST MINIMIZE the spread of germs, bacteria, and viruses of countless sorts:
in view of that, then, the cheating is not that important --- it's the cost to society that all of us, directly or indirectly, must pay to help these idiots who exchange bodily fluids like chimpanzees that is the big issue
Another women for the swamps of New Orleans
Let's ship all these sluts down to New Orleans and let them fuck the brothers so the brother stop shoot at the people trying to saved others. They desreve the niggers and when they are done with them we can use them to block up the leaks in the dams. Yep works for me, all those dumn ass white women who think it's so great to fuck a black man, move to NO and let them all have your white cunt.
What a slut! A married woman touches a smooth
sheet and just drops her panties!! Come on! She let's a strange man fuck her w/o protection not knowing who he is or who he has been with? Come on!!!! What woman would do that? I mean fucking another man is one thing, but a man you don't know?? Maybe she'll get knocked up that's true since neither were smart enough to use protection. But maybe she'll get AIDS and die! Maybe she'll give it to her husband too and he'll die! What was the aurthor thinking? If the aurthor wanted this to happen, then he should have written a longer story and inculde somethingbeing done to ensure the part about illness and babies were handled. No husband knowing she wa having a balck baby would stay with her. No, I'm sorry no woman would drop her panties just for a fuck on some type of bed sheet or the largest cock she ever saw. Same old smae old. This gets a 2 rating from me. Please make your stories just a little more realistic! please.
Gee
Gee what a slut. that the only story here poor hubby works wife cheats
Gee
Gee what a slut. that the only story here poor hubby works wife cheats
To Anonymous (Swamps of NO)
Thank you for your totally ignorant comments. With white guys like you who can't even spell, it's no wonder that white women have fantasies of fucking black men. Enjoy your masturbation, because I'm sure that's all you ever get!
Great
Needs a continuation. What is going to happen if she finds she is preggie with this nigger's baby?
You are the perfect wife
I would love to have a wife exactly like you, including looks and character. I hope my next wife is as open as you are. I would love to watch her get off while she is fucking other men, especially black men with big cocks. Thank you very much for sharing your experiences.
Still trying to get even with Tony, eh!!!
Started reading your stories...starting with "trolling"...I suspect you are still trying to get even with Tony...either change the characters...or change the attitude...remarkably...the Tony character shows complete "INDIFFERENCE" to what you are doing...and that's probably what's pissing you off....
'nuff said
Andy
About Tony...
I actually don't know a Tony... Tony is like my generic guy name, used for characters who have no importance to me... I also like that name because it is easy for me to type...
But I wasn't aware of that trait I have, so I will work on it... Thanks for the suggestion!
GREAT!!!
AS USUAL NO BODY GETS IT. IT WAS A GREAT STORY AND I LOVED HOW YOU EXPLAINED THE SENSES OF FEELING THE SATIN SHEETS, VERY EROTIC STORY, KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING
Swamps of New Orleans
From the gist of your ignorant comments, I’ve pegged you as the same jerk who sent me a negative feedback in the exact same vein, only much crueler, with direct mention of me being killed by those black men gangbanging me. Got a real problem with this genre, don’t you,? Odds are you lost a girlfriend (or wife) to a black man. I don’t suppose it’s ever occurred to you that it could very well be due to his being better lover than you and had nothing to do with his skin color.
I saved your email and, if satinlvr_mwf wants your addy, so she can fire a volley or two at you, all she has to do is ask for it.
Anyway, my 100% cancels out your double zero. You hateful, racists pig!
JordonLynn
I don't think that an decent wife would ever do
what this woman did. I mean she fucks another man becasue she felt the sheets? Good god! Talk about getting turned on fast! ZOOOOOOOM!!! That's a little far fetched isn't it? If the story was more realistic, I would have given you a higher rating. Sorry.
Now I have to say something. It's about the very nasty comment from that other reader regarding race. Anyone who writes about race stands the chance of getting nasy feedback. Some people feel it's not right to mix rqace. Especially married women being had by men of a different color, black red white yellow or whatever. Sweetie, it's a free country and the writer did want feed back back good or bad. I won't go any further. But another reader gets pissed off about someone talking about the writer??? WTF!
I think that reader should just get a life woman! Please!! If a woman did what this woman did in the story she would be a compete slut! "I fucked him baby becasue I felt his sheets sorry husband! I'm sorry, I know he was a friend!" For God sakes, if he was a friend he wouldn't have even tried to fuck her. I know it's a story but some folks realy get involved. This tells me the writer did a job on emotions. BUT COME ON READER! I guess now I'll get a nasty e-mail too from that bitch too. Oh well, so be it! That's my 2 cents!
WHORE WIFE
THIS WOMAN IS NOTHING BUT A WHORE AND I HOPE HUBBY FINDS OUT AND KICKS HER ASS TO THE CURB. SHE IS NOTHING BUT A CUNT THAT DESERVES EVERYTHING SHE GETS.
Anonymous strikes again
satinlvr_mwf,
Decided to let everyone in on this guy's bigoted state of mind, so, along with Anonymous' racist treatment of this story, here's what else my comment was in response to:
Comments:
Hey Jordon! I have an idea for you for a story. How about you write a story
about yourself in New Orleans being grouped fucked in the Superdome by a group
of roving black criminals. You could get VD and AID and have your fucking dumb
whiteass cunt blown off by a gun shoved up inside you after the nigger stole it
while others were trying to help people. You know the humans who helped others.
Not the niggers you love so much. I mean you love black men so much they could
fuck you in the men's room and then shit on you! Na, never mind you would most
likely enjoy that to much. Maybe they could just fuck you in the ally and leave
your dumb white ass laying in the dirty water. What do you think?
This was his feedback to me on Alice's Addiction and here is something I got not 5 minutes after I posted my first comment to you:
Anonymous
Comments:
You truck size cunt is only good for a nigger. If my mother or wife fcuked a
black man then he can have her, I sure as hell won't want her back. And as for
you you bvlack cum holding nigger loving white trassh. Just clsoe your traler
door so no decent woman has to se you fucking a monkey! Eat shit and die bitch.
You know who I am sperm mouth. If you think blacks fuck better than white, move
to the inner city and fuck al you wnat. You know someone could make a bite of
money off your white ass!
Sound like the same guy to any you? Inbred jerk also needs to learn how to spell.
Keep up the good writing, satinlvr_mwf. Hope to hear back from you via feedback to me.
JordonLynn
To me, you just wrote half of a story.
There are no consequences, there is no guilt. Is the woman in the story different from other women? They say that men just think with the little head, did this woman just think with her crack?
Your use of a stereotypical black man in your story shows no imagination. All black men are not sexual gods that are better built, better equipped and having the sexual stamina of a dozen men. And yet, you ,along with dozens of authors, perpetuate this myth constantly.
I have no problems with race, I just have a problem with the same cookie-cutter black man showing up in every story. I hope he gets paid well.
My Response
I am literally shocked at some of the comments I have received, both on this comment board, and in my e-mail.
Jordan, thank you for your support, and please know that I, also, received an e-mail similar to yours. It is a pity that there are such hateful people like that. The person from the swamps of N.O. might be happier if he just stayed there.
For sherlock, perhaps a CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would have been more likely to take you seriously. For some, the stereo-typical black man with an enormous appendage is what they find interesting. If you do not, so be it. You knew it was an interracial story, so I see no reason for you to be offended.
For those who have made comment about the morals of the heroine of the story. Just because her values are not yours, that does not make her bad... (or me, for that matter...I just wrote a damn story!) And your particular input is decidely worthless, as you do not even have the spine to identify yourself. Grow up.
There have been a few e-mails asking about a follow-on for this... I am intrigued to see what might happen if, indeed, the girl is bearing Ron's child... Will have to think about this one...
In closing, it might be a good idea for all concerned to think about what they are writing in these posts. Not one of you, and I include myself in this, is omniscient. You do NOT know what a woman MIGHT do in a certain circumstance. I like to explore some of those possibilities, and my stories are the result. Just because she does something you do not approve of, that does not make her wrong. It just might be her best decision for all involved...
And for the record, before I was married, there was a man I dated, only because he had satin bedding... and I loved to be on it! So yes, sometimes a girl WILL have sex, just to be ensconsed in the cool, smooth, and slippery fabric... Like me, don't like me, I do not care. But enough with the personal attacks...
Well for what it's worth, and some mays say not
much, I don't usually read racial stories since I don't feel it's right to put this sort of thing out for young peoople to read and think about doing. I wouldn't want my daughter to have sex with anyone until she is married. But should she decide to do it, then I would hope it would be with someone I approve of. I don't want her to have sex with a black man and I don't believe a black man would want his daughter to have sex white white man. If that makes me a racist than so be it, I am.
When a woman has sex with anyone after she is married then she' in my opinion is a cheating slut of a whore. Poeple who write stories like this aren't!! But some folks can't seperate fact from fiction and when you write and ask for feedback you put yourself out there. Your story didn't give much info about why she did what she did, just that she liked the sheets. If that's true this woman is a bigger whore than most. She was cheating on her husband and of course doing it with a black guy who had a huge cock. This is another reason I stopped reading these stories for the ost part. Actually I read it after the hell that has been flying around these comments. Blacks like white come in all sizes and shapes and so do thier cocks. Just once I would like to read about a black man with a normal size dick who was just OK when a woman had sex with him. Blacks are not all great lovers with unlimited cum or endurance. Or reead about a woman who wouldn't just drop to her knees and suck his cock because he had clean or silky sheets, or other simple things etc. The comments sent to the writer were uncalled for but I can see why some people would feel the need to send them. If the writer likes black cock so be it. But, from what I have seen with the mixing of the races, very few white women are treated well or even respected after the black man has finished having sex with them. Most of these woman are then passed around or all the black man's friends know she was having sedx with the black man. Her repretations is poor to say the least It's done away with and she is hit on and hit on and hit on by other blacks. They love to turn white women intowhors, real whores. Most of these women then become just a piece of meat, something to fuck. And these days they, the blacks, try to knock them up so they will have a mixed race child to take care of for the rest of their lives. This in alot of cases destroyes the white woman's life and makes the chaild hard to raise. It seperates them from friends and families and makes the woman a sad and alone mother with a kid no one wants.
Thank you twice…
...both for the comments and the vote on Alice’s Addiction; you’re too kind. You are obviously educated, meaning you know how to use the English language and tend to employ words of more than one syllable, both of which score major points with me.
While directly—by email—would be more preferable, since this seems to be the only way of communicating with you, I also want to apologize for picking a fight with that inbred, uneducated racist, Anonymous, in your public comments; this was rude of me.
This second 100% will cancel out at least one of vastiesmith’s double 00s. JordonLynn
JordonLynn back at ya... again
I attempted to contact you through the email address you provided, but it came back as failed. Apparently, your email there is private; meaning, you can’t accept mail there. Not unless you change the setting, or so I assume.
Sincerely, JordonLynn
Continue to write what you want.
I cannot believe the anger behind a simple story. Especially from other (self-described) writers! NeedYou writes stuff that David Duke would call racist. And Vastiesmith? One her characters (Dee) had an affair/bore a child that her Husband (unwittingly) raised, yet she says her character is decent but yours is not? I didn't like the story so much (no consequence for cheating) but I'm giving you a 100 anyway, just to counter their...HYPOCRISY! I guarantee you, they (and Don w/numbers)all live in Red States. NeedYou lost his woman to a Black Man and Vastie, her heart. The nimrods stuck on color, need more help than your stories can give. If the New Testament can't do it, what hope do you have?
Lionel in NorCal
I Love your stories
I love your stories, especially having the slut dressed sexy in satin dresses and blouses and especially nylons. I wish you would wear a garter belt instead of thigh highs and show off those nylon tops under your satin mini skirts. Fucking someone while they're still dressed like that is very sensuous. Especially when you cum all over their clothes and face. Check out fullyclothedsex.com and my-fetish.net.
Keep up the hot stories and don't worry about these Hemingway wannabees.
Some people need to relax.
Look, I wasn't a huge fan of the story. While I like the basic storyline, it seemed as though the actual sex scene itself was a little rushed. There should have been greater detail about the sex, and, personally, I would have liked more dialouge between the characters.
In fact, I felt it needed more detail in every aspect. As others have said, it does seem a little unrealistic, but I think that, again, has a lot to do with a lack of detail in the lead up to the sex itself. The wife should've tried to stop him for a time. At least that would have made it appear as though she was trying to be faithful.
With that being said, other people on here need to wake up. The racists need to realise they're reading interracial stories. This will mean people from different races having sex, believe it or not. If you don't like this, then don't read it. Go wash your bedsheets or shave your head or something.
Those that have problems with the womens infedility and not using a condom need to realise its just a story. I for one quite liked that aspect of the story, and I know many others would too. A lot of people, granted, would not. If it's not something you like, just read a different story, without persecuting a writer for delivering storylines which many others find erotic.
a cheating wife
The husband better not be cockolded by the wife when he gets home he should jusr=t tell her dont bother to get up im divorcing you on adultry so stay with your black lover .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Good Story
Keep writing, and ignore the ignorant rednecks who think women are to be owned, dominated, and beaten if they do not do as the abusive redneck type commenters on here want. Most like your writing so, ignore those ignoramuses.
Sexy Wife
I too enjoyed this story, so ignore the bigots and keep writing. I love the description of the wife’s attire, especially that she chose to wear satin panties that matched her satin outer garments. I liked the fact that she was so easily turned on by the satin bed cover and how easily she succumbed to the advances of her husband's black boss the moment his back was turned. My only real criticism is that at the point that she was seduced it all happened a little too quickly. I was hoping for a more drawn out seduction as she succumbed to Ron's advances but 75% all the same.
This situation is far from impossible as some may suggest, I should know. My wife unexpectedly succumbed to temptation at her office Christmas party a few years ago. It was a fancy dress party held in a hotel and before the evening was over she was having sex with a colleague in the bridal suite. Several of them went to check out how big and romantic the room was after someone found it open. My wife was dressed as a French maid and was feeling incredibly sexy all evening dressed in silk and lace. She was getting into character, pretending to perform her maid’s duties in the room; much to everyone’s amusement. When all but my wife and a colleague had left the room, the atmosphere changed and their flirting suddenly turned to passion as he groped her satin covered arse. She was so turned on at this point, she could not control herself and pushed him onto the four poster bed and demanded that he fuck her hard. She could not really explain what came over her, she had no feelings for the guy and in fact at work she didn't really like him. She was drunk on the atmosphere and surroundings and gave in to the overwhelming urge for sex and yes the other guy was black, well hung and a good lover. I was in the hotel bar at the time and was none the wiser until later on the dance floor when I groped her arse and discovered the semen on her panties. To my knowledge she has never done anything like this again and although she apologised profusely for her actions, does not feel any guilt. I couldn't really blame her, in my experience and contrary to popular belief it is far more likely for a woman to lose control and give in to her sexual urges than it is for a man. As they say - girls just want to have fun!
...property of ANOTHER BLACK ADONIS!!!...
...she's become the breeder vessel for her hubby's boss!!!...YOU GO GIRL!!!...sign the contract to belong to him...and cucold hubby permanently!!!
Those clothes....!
God, those clothes sound horrible. Pink and white,yuk .
It is true once you go back you cant go back!
There are several reasons but only one that matters. ONce you have gone that low in society no one really wants you any longer, you are pure trash.
based on he's black?
Perhaps her slutty desires, but catagory irrelevant to the end of her marriage.
Ron would have you again?
WHEN? Please hurry.
M
more
go further.... she needs more..
what a stupid whore
they dont even have a relationship to consummate!!! i hope hubby blows his black balls off.
Whore
This wife was't seduced, no sooner than hubby out the way she just opened her legs dressed like she was she gve every indication of being a slut.I'm sure Ron will be regular cuckholding Tony.
Tony should tell her to fuck off to Ron permanently and divorce her.
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