All Comments on 'First & Intense'

by ShaunaM

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Promising Beginning

Excellent work... hope to see more. The only thing I'd like to see more of is detail - what do Debbie and Alyssa look like? What do they do - are they students? (Perhaps Debbie is a grad student or a young prof, and Alyssa's her freshman roommate.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hell yh

hell yh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
intense read

That almost made me cum just reading the story. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wtf

that made me have an orgasm wow i havent cum like that in a long time so good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
holy fuck

woooow that was amazing, kind of like how me an my girl got together

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Too sexy

Reminds me of the sailor I love to miss. I miss my beautiful Navy baby.

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