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Manic?
So much said outright, and in underlying tones.
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Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
du lac~
Oh, logo!
Simply wonderful ... and wonderfully complex. ~Imp
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Incredible. A beautifully written and emotionally powerful piece. The emotions jumped off the page and grabbed me by my shoulders and shook me.
TY,BD
like this......
and nice visuals throughout. i have to agree with curiouswife as to the possibility of manic. great stuff.....don
wow!
"...at a pace that dizzied me" This is an apt description of this work. As I read it, initially curious and confused, I became more and more intrigued...by your mother, and your memories of her. I honestly didn't want it to end, because I felt there was so much more to know. Silly me! You pared it down to those few lines, and that's what makes this poetry so good. Nice work, indeed!
mothers and daughters
Wow, this is a powerful poem. "She let me in to her soul and
I got to be part of it too." How connected we always are, even when we aren't. Beautiful.
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I want to say that this is bittersweet, but that's not quite right. It is, however, somehow sad while being incredibly sweet at the same time. The last lines really struck a chord in me.
Interesting
A small piece of life told with a wonderful conciseness.
Nicely done.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems.
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I saw this on the archive thread
and thought, " I bet thats what my husband and kids think of me."
anyway, this is an excellent piece, insightful and shows so much patience and love on your part, I just had to come tosss it a vote.
love this one, logo!!
xoxox
NJ
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