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very nice
a very nice write blue
Empty Nest ~
I know how hard you worked on this Blue.
I lovvvveee it.
It speaks of loving smiles, playful playmates
and a wholesome heart.
I love the imagery, and
your flow ... smooth as silk.
Just makes me wanna jump
in this poem and play it out ...
Morreee Please !!!!
reminding me ..
of 'seasons in the sun' i swear that went through my mind the entire time.. this is one of your best i think, with your playful heart leading the way... and makes me wish to be young, just once more... luv2theblu.-sGp-
reminding me ..
of 'seasons in the sun' i swear that went through my mind the entire time.. this is one of your best i think, with your playful heart leading the way... and makes me wish to be young, just once more... luv2theblu.-sGp-
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Just love it;
such vibrant imagery
at different levels;
picturing innocence
and debauchery...
Beautiful
The innocence soon turned as a trees bloom. I love it. Gorgeous wordplay.
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