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Your poem has been mentioned in the Sunday reviews.
du lac~
**5**
An other great ZMP!!! Thank you so much for written them all ZMA!!!
Speachless ~
I saw this on the thread, and here again it takes my breathe ~ Just a powerful write and so emotional!!
Grabbs your heart and just stopps ...
feeling beats echooooing. Love the imagery, sadness too. Just a wonderful, breath taking ride ...
Art, this is one of those that one wants to read over and over. Just classic writing/poetry at its best, if you ask me !
*Smiles*
my input....
has hovered like an eagle over this, and here are my highlights of choice:
stained by age
and by death
survival justifies its right.
and -
zero visibility without a sun
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just some rambling here. sometimes zero visibility is a good thing, it can make one use instincts better. sounds good anyway.......nicely done art.......don
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With night's vision
comes night's wisdom;
and once again,
well done...
BREATH..LESS
IN THE SOUTH..
another wonderful
addition to that
of your zmp files,
I shall return,
with wings,
to read again...
*****
-sGp-
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