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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
crude

the story's very very crude but yet it works..beautiful imagery

gizzmo301gizzmo301over 18 years ago
wow

wow another cheating wife story

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

Another wimpy husband story - India too I guess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a nonny mouse

Well, you get 25% for spelling. Why did you think it was even necessary to write this story? It has been done a thousand times,and generally much better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
LUV CHEATING WIVES

great work! very detailed1 fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Hot and nice. its true that the wet cunt of wife is better when she had with her lover.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The worst shit I have ever seen.

Story have no plot, no character, gramar is so bad that it sounds like it just come out of idiot school. Need I say more???

1jbm1jbmalmost 12 years ago
Hot story

I enjoyed reading your story.

My cock is still hard

I would enjoy followup stories.

Joe

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 9 years ago
Yeah...

...and Manitu laughs his head of at that much bravery.You squaw...me cuck..and a very wimpy one, when it comes to that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
hott

More Atul please

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Joke

Just a joke from start.to finish. Dude can't even spell jissum right.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineabout 1 year ago

He should have cut off Atul’s nuts.

Anonymous
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