hey thats a nice story. can't wait for chapter five.
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Anonymous09/26/05
Good work!
Very impressive story, I enjoyed how simple yet involving it was. Well done!
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Anonymous02/03/07
Absolutely love it!
I wish she would call him 'daddy' tho.... for whatever reason, I like that. Maybe because that's what I call my Daddy?!
Thanks for a wonderful story, I'm gonna read em all! *Rechargeable batteries!*
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Anonymous08/03/07
break a leg and go to heaven
i wish cindy had not come into the equation, but even so, it is turning out a really good tale, there must be further chapters to come. i can't believe carol left it so long between shagging her dad, surely she was totally hooked on sex after the second encounter. loved it all the same
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Anonymous02/13/08
ruined
leave cindy out, she messed the whole thing up. besides she is a slut, and not in a good way. she reminds me of the kind of girl who has aids and everything else from being around the block (10 times)!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous02/26/08
Don't Stop Now
This is turning into a great series so please don't let it finish there
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Anonymous07/22/08
Better And Better!
This story just kept improving! Chap. 4 was the best of all. It had everything but anal. (Hey, maybe that'll be in Chap. 5!) Great job! Keep writing!
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Anonymous12/10/09
More please
I loved your stories in the series very much. They are so hot! Please keep up the great work! Looking forward to Ch. 5!
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Anonymous02/09/12
CINDY/CAROL& INJURED DADDY
WELL THIS WAS GREAT A LITTLE SHY ON THE ENDING BUT WAS O.K. I THINK ONE MORE CHAPTER TO STRIGHTEN THE GIRLS I LIKE TO HAPPY AND LOVEABLE ENDING,I WOULD LIKE THE GIRLS TO GET TOGETHER AND KEEP
DADDY HAPPY THATS WHAT CAROL STARTED TO DO NOW FINSH IT,,DO THE RIGHT THING AND GIVE YOUR FANS A HAPPY ENDING,I LIKED THE SEX PART ON IT AND IT WAS ALMOST LIKE IT COULD BE A REAL LIFE ROUTINE FOR SOME DAD AND DAUGHTER OR STEP-DAUGHTER YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF THIS STORY AND I GIVE YOU 5 STARS PLUS ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,''R''...................... ...............
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Anonymous02/18/12
Cindy
I liked the story right up to the point Cindy shows up, that took all the fun out of the story, what a shame.
I note that all the comments are unnamed except for one who has no works on here.I am not unnamed but I also have no works on here for I am always looking for authors with potential. Your writting lacked polish but that can easily ironed out.You were doing well with an old plot but it did have a twist to it.Then you just spoiled it all.
English
What Next
Daughter and now the slut from next door. Who will it be next? Great story so far.
All I can say is WOW
Wow, what a turn on. Would love to be part of the group
Bravo Bravo
Yea yea go for ch. 5 thanks crh
Nice story
hey thats a nice story. can't wait for chapter five.
Good work!
Very impressive story, I enjoyed how simple yet involving it was. Well done!
Absolutely love it!
I wish she would call him 'daddy' tho.... for whatever reason, I like that. Maybe because that's what I call my Daddy?!
Thanks for a wonderful story, I'm gonna read em all! *Rechargeable batteries!*
break a leg and go to heaven
i wish cindy had not come into the equation, but even so, it is turning out a really good tale, there must be further chapters to come. i can't believe carol left it so long between shagging her dad, surely she was totally hooked on sex after the second encounter. loved it all the same
ruined
leave cindy out, she messed the whole thing up. besides she is a slut, and not in a good way. she reminds me of the kind of girl who has aids and everything else from being around the block (10 times)!!!!!!!!!!
Don't Stop Now
This is turning into a great series so please don't let it finish there
Better And Better!
This story just kept improving! Chap. 4 was the best of all. It had everything but anal. (Hey, maybe that'll be in Chap. 5!) Great job! Keep writing!
More please
I loved your stories in the series very much. They are so hot! Please keep up the great work! Looking forward to Ch. 5!
CINDY/CAROL& INJURED DADDY
WELL THIS WAS GREAT A LITTLE SHY ON THE ENDING BUT WAS O.K. I THINK ONE MORE CHAPTER TO STRIGHTEN THE GIRLS I LIKE TO HAPPY AND LOVEABLE ENDING,I WOULD LIKE THE GIRLS TO GET TOGETHER AND KEEP
DADDY HAPPY THATS WHAT CAROL STARTED TO DO NOW FINSH IT,,DO THE RIGHT THING AND GIVE YOUR FANS A HAPPY ENDING,I LIKED THE SEX PART ON IT AND IT WAS ALMOST LIKE IT COULD BE A REAL LIFE ROUTINE FOR SOME DAD AND DAUGHTER OR STEP-DAUGHTER YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF THIS STORY AND I GIVE YOU 5 STARS PLUS ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,''R''...................... ...............
Cindy
I liked the story right up to the point Cindy shows up, that took all the fun out of the story, what a shame.
Comments
I note that all the comments are unnamed except for one who has no works on here.I am not unnamed but I also have no works on here for I am always looking for authors with potential. Your writting lacked polish but that can easily ironed out.You were doing well with an old plot but it did have a twist to it.Then you just spoiled it all.
Why
why do ppl ruin good stories of daddy daughter sex by adding another person all the time
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