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Oh yeah, Lisa

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by sweet GA peaches09/06/05

OH YEAH, CURIOUS !

DAYUM !! what a mind blowing write you have left in my thoughts ! AWESOME ! sGp

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by J.Doe09/06/05

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This poem has new idea for erotic poetry, but its delivered with an overused metaphor.

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by Anonymous09/06/05

Excellent

The parallel fires is a wonderful and clever trope in this poem. Good work.

Fly

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by LeBroz09/10/05

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A pleasure to read;
not just the verse,
but the memories you invoke;
of living fossils still alive today ~
that's improper conduct and
not the way it's done!

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