Awesome story! I love the way you intermingled her counting off the spankings into the rest of the story. I may have given you a basic idea, but what you did with the story was way above what I expected to see. The little twist you through in was an unexpected surprise too! I think I'm still tingling from this one!
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Anonymous09/09/05
very hot
oh god it got me so hard, just reading this store..and with allie in it made me very horny....always get horny for allie......
This makes up for the other one, and tops the other one also. Excellent!! I don't know what else to say. Your allowing others to read your work, and in a way discover things that they would be willing to try someday.
English
Wow!
Awesome story! I love the way you intermingled her counting off the spankings into the rest of the story. I may have given you a basic idea, but what you did with the story was way above what I expected to see. The little twist you through in was an unexpected surprise too! I think I'm still tingling from this one!
very hot
oh god it got me so hard, just reading this store..and with allie in it made me very horny....always get horny for allie......
Shivers
WOW!!
This makes up for the other one, and tops the other one also. Excellent!! I don't know what else to say. Your allowing others to read your work, and in a way discover things that they would be willing to try someday.
Great Read!!
Red
mmmmmmmmmmm, yummy
Reading this made my pussy so wet!
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