I loved your story. Your story flows effortlessly, carrying me away to your place and time.... experiencing it.... feeling it's emotion... pleasures....
one of the best...
thanks.
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08/09/06
Very Nicely Done!
Loved it! So obviously female. (Males LOVE much more graphic descriptions, so imagination isn't quite so stimulated. Not as erotic) Very nicely done, I agree with the previous eval. I think of the small "spell-check" and "grammar-check" errors, just a minor distraction. But the thought ofyou in scandalous "I Dream of Jeannie" costume---or the cutie in the Star Wars costume, Princess Leia, held captive---and posing, hoping your lovely too-large breasts falling out as cameras click away....oops, bent over too far!!! And your mate....just a smiling-proud-stud...rubbing his crotch in eager anticipation! yum
English
articulate, sensitive, captivating...
I loved your story. Your story flows effortlessly, carrying me away to your place and time.... experiencing it.... feeling it's emotion... pleasures....
one of the best...
thanks.
Very Nicely Done!
Loved it! So obviously female. (Males LOVE much more graphic descriptions, so imagination isn't quite so stimulated. Not as erotic) Very nicely done, I agree with the previous eval. I think of the small "spell-check" and "grammar-check" errors, just a minor distraction. But the thought ofyou in scandalous "I Dream of Jeannie" costume---or the cutie in the Star Wars costume, Princess Leia, held captive---and posing, hoping your lovely too-large breasts falling out as cameras click away....oops, bent over too far!!! And your mate....just a smiling-proud-stud...rubbing his crotch in eager anticipation! yum
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