Wait a minute... You licked her playpen clean? Where did this playpen come from? I don't remember any mention of a playpen before that! And why on earth would you lick one? Have I gone mad?
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Anonymous11/02/06
Wording?
The wording kind of distracted from the story. Can't say it was my favorite.
Yup, Granny knew what she wanted did she not? might as well have been his b'day as well as He really lucked out. Pretty good frostin' on that cake huh?
great story
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Playpen?
Wait a minute... You licked her playpen clean? Where did this playpen come from? I don't remember any mention of a playpen before that! And why on earth would you lick one? Have I gone mad?
Wording?
The wording kind of distracted from the story. Can't say it was my favorite.
no no no
try again could not stay focus
no no no
try again could not stay focus
to boring
to boring i agree playpen wtf you need to try again.
grandma need love too
good reading some flaws here and there but interesting story.
i get the playpen remarks
Can't get that at a store
Yup, Granny knew what she wanted did she not? might as well have been his b'day as well as He really lucked out. Pretty good frostin' on that cake huh?
great story
oki
That sucked
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