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Such great descriptions and imagry
as you take us on your travels through worlds of oppression and freedom. I understand this all too well. Good write.
Outstanding
Wonderful tension across the bridge.
Fly
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Creative word choices, new and different. Most importantly, this poem is so alive, it breathes.
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It breathes...and echoes.
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