From now on, just stick to reading... because from the way you told this story, not only am I lacking a boner... but I'm not completely sure it happened. I have a hard time beleiving this pile of shit you call a story.
It is not so easy to write a story... where is the build up, where is the romanticism? Your storytelling is like having a premature ejaculation! I reccommend you to read the writing of "rubysen" (literotica member)... she is also from Kolkata, and writes excellent stories.. read them and learn.
English
it fucking sucks big fucking dick balls
PIECE OF SHIT
OMG THAT SUCKED FUCKING DONKEY BALLS!!!
From now on, just stick to reading... because from the way you told this story, not only am I lacking a boner... but I'm not completely sure it happened. I have a hard time beleiving this pile of shit you call a story.
Golpo Lekha Sohoj Na!
It is not so easy to write a story... where is the build up, where is the romanticism? Your storytelling is like having a premature ejaculation! I reccommend you to read the writing of "rubysen" (literotica member)... she is also from Kolkata, and writes excellent stories.. read them and learn.
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