One of the worst,ever!!!! One wonders about the future of this here planet.
by
Anonymous04/06/11
Criticism without facts is mindless twaddle
- plead, encourage, support works well to motivate others to improve their game
- criticism without stating how things can be made better is simply the bleating or a cretin
- if the mindless twit sees this comment then please advise what it is that so offends you
- keep in mind that this Web site has a wide range of talent and different strokes for different folks and is obviously full of sex that can be stimulating and benefit to many different peoples
DAVE_THE_KNAVE 110406
by
Anonymous04/10/11
To anon below...
You are an illiterate idiot. Is this enough critique ??
Jack likes Karen, will fuck her it she want it. Jack loves both Debbie and Beth. Joe and Cathy come over to Jack's apartment. Jack undressed Cathy and starts in her pussy and come in her ass. Beth gives Joe a blow job. That just about cover this chapter... More plz...
The story frothed with human emotional exchange as well as mindless sexual passion in great balance making the setting almost warm and peachy ...what a feat! !The author unfolded this story masterfully from scene to scene demonstrating the extent of love lust and passion that constantly intersected these characters that made this fantasy work inspite of the most skeptical reader's leanings. This author isvery sensing and plugs into the heart mind and lustful veins of every decent and illicit any blue blooded reader especially this one. It works well not only as a smut horny flash but a human interest story. It was simply a fascinating read and I couldn't get enough. This author deserves my thanks for the entertainment and thought provoking challenges that were presented! !
by
Anonymous12/24/13
ass
that was some remarkable ass-pounding there my friend.. epic!
by
Anonymous12/30/14
wow
This is so strange. But I love it. On one side of the family I myself have a cousin Karen and a cousin Debbie. On the other side of my family I have a cousin Cathy and I've not yet fucked ALL of them. Not yet. I've done anal, and this is not the way its done. At least the first time. One needs lots of extra lube, like Astroglide, for good, enjoyable, painless, and blood-free anal sex. A man can tear a woman's internal tissues by probeing her pooper without slickum on his PeePee. I did that to a woman once. Later, she talked me into playing a bondage game. While she had me tied up she shoved a dildo up my ass dry asking me how I liked it. I went and bought a giant economy sized box of medical grade lube made for gynecological exams, I can tell you. I love the complete lack of jealousy or possessiveness with the ladies in his life, and there is no layer of promiscuity placed on any of the women. Plenty of it on Jack, but he has earned it because he would fuck a snake if it was held straight for him. Can't wait to read more.
English
5 stars
great group scene
Absolute crap story by a mindless imbecile!!
One of the worst,ever!!!! One wonders about the future of this here planet.
Criticism without facts is mindless twaddle
- plead, encourage, support works well to motivate others to improve their game
- criticism without stating how things can be made better is simply the bleating or a cretin
- if the mindless twit sees this comment then please advise what it is that so offends you
- keep in mind that this Web site has a wide range of talent and different strokes for different folks and is obviously full of sex that can be stimulating and benefit to many different peoples
DAVE_THE_KNAVE 110406
To anon below...
You are an illiterate idiot. Is this enough critique ??
Jack's Harem?
Jack likes Karen, will fuck her it she want it. Jack loves both Debbie and Beth. Joe and Cathy come over to Jack's apartment. Jack undressed Cathy and starts in her pussy and come in her ass. Beth gives Joe a blow job. That just about cover this chapter... More plz...
Great story
The story frothed with human emotional exchange as well as mindless sexual passion in great balance making the setting almost warm and peachy ...what a feat! !The author unfolded this story masterfully from scene to scene demonstrating the extent of love lust and passion that constantly intersected these characters that made this fantasy work inspite of the most skeptical reader's leanings. This author isvery sensing and plugs into the heart mind and lustful veins of every decent and illicit any blue blooded reader especially this one. It works well not only as a smut horny flash but a human interest story. It was simply a fascinating read and I couldn't get enough. This author deserves my thanks for the entertainment and thought provoking challenges that were presented! !
ass
that was some remarkable ass-pounding there my friend.. epic!
wow
This is so strange. But I love it. On one side of the family I myself have a cousin Karen and a cousin Debbie. On the other side of my family I have a cousin Cathy and I've not yet fucked ALL of them. Not yet. I've done anal, and this is not the way its done. At least the first time. One needs lots of extra lube, like Astroglide, for good, enjoyable, painless, and blood-free anal sex. A man can tear a woman's internal tissues by probeing her pooper without slickum on his PeePee. I did that to a woman once. Later, she talked me into playing a bondage game. While she had me tied up she shoved a dildo up my ass dry asking me how I liked it. I went and bought a giant economy sized box of medical grade lube made for gynecological exams, I can tell you. I love the complete lack of jealousy or possessiveness with the ladies in his life, and there is no layer of promiscuity placed on any of the women. Plenty of it on Jack, but he has earned it because he would fuck a snake if it was held straight for him. Can't wait to read more.
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