When you get down to it, what's sexier than the seductive dance performed by a man and a woman around the sexual fire--getting by giving and winning by surrendering? This little battle around a pool table is fought by two people who know it's not who wins, but how you play the game that counts.
"As always, the control was his, and as always the power was hers." A great line by an author who obviously understands the unwritten rules herself. Nicely done.
This is true erotica and I thouroughly enjoyed it. Perfect? Well it's about as close as one can get I think!
I first read this story in 2005 or 2006 but never had posted a comment and I should have back then.
I had a similar experience oh so long ago and I could def. relate to the man's point of view here. Mysticalvixxxen has a true talent for this type of genre and I do so hope to see much, much more of her work. How about a game of pool?
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Anonymous12/29/08
Excellent as always
You have a fan in me! All your work makes me so hot. You write true erotica! Kudos! I'll be anxiously looking for new work from you...pleae do keep it cumming... just like you do us...;)
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Anonymous09/20/09
Awesome
I saw you won a best of 2008 award. Congrats! Usually you find that an author has one true excellent piece in them and that's it but I read this and saw that its not the case with you. Very hot and very well crafted... please give us more.
i'm always amazed and impressed when an authour can let a reader imagine anyone in the characters... when physical descriptions take a back seat to pure fantasy... and this authour does just that - here, and in all of her stories.
English
Sweet and Hot
When you get down to it, what's sexier than the seductive dance performed by a man and a woman around the sexual fire--getting by giving and winning by surrendering? This little battle around a pool table is fought by two people who know it's not who wins, but how you play the game that counts.
"As always, the control was his, and as always the power was hers." A great line by an author who obviously understands the unwritten rules herself. Nicely done.
Is this perfect erotica?
This is true erotica and I thouroughly enjoyed it. Perfect? Well it's about as close as one can get I think!
I first read this story in 2005 or 2006 but never had posted a comment and I should have back then.
I had a similar experience oh so long ago and I could def. relate to the man's point of view here. Mysticalvixxxen has a true talent for this type of genre and I do so hope to see much, much more of her work. How about a game of pool?
Excellent as always
You have a fan in me! All your work makes me so hot. You write true erotica! Kudos! I'll be anxiously looking for new work from you...pleae do keep it cumming... just like you do us...;)
Awesome
I saw you won a best of 2008 award. Congrats! Usually you find that an author has one true excellent piece in them and that's it but I read this and saw that its not the case with you. Very hot and very well crafted... please give us more.
riveting...
i'm always amazed and impressed when an authour can let a reader imagine anyone in the characters... when physical descriptions take a back seat to pure fantasy... and this authour does just that - here, and in all of her stories.
this lady is worth bookmarking, fellow readers...
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