All Comments on 'Jacinta's Tale'

Smiles... you are prolific...I bow at your feet...kiss them maybe...winks.

A slice of life, as it were. "Consensual" rape allows her escape across a dangerous border, but when immediately confronted with another male threat, she does what she has to. Controlled, intelligent, shocking.

You managed this telling extremely well – engaging the reader throughout. Every word sharp, pointed, functional. Sparse, and as her heart must feel, focussed on the moment – nothing more. This is not an easy subject, but oh, you handled it superbly. Nice work. 5 stars.