Brotherly Love Ch. 06

Good

I liked it, much better than the last. But the last few chapters seem to have lost some of the sexiness of the first two. Good job though, and thanks for sharing with us!

seems a tad stilted?

I liked the previous chapters better, more playful and real dialogue? Bit like a porn manual right now :) No hurry, take your time!!

wheres the next story?

loved the stories, hope you write another soon.

Next please!!!

Hurry up and come out with your next one, i love these stories. They are really great. Hurry up with that next one! You have a lot of fans waiting!:)

Good, but...

I'm curious aabout where the sexiness and passion went. Your skill as an author is still good, but there wasn't enough heat, in my opinio

WRITE MORE

please theses stories are hot and romatic, please write some more chapters!!!!!

give it to me

more more more

HURRY UP!!! =)

Forget what other said except for those agreeing with me lol. LOVE the stories,, hurry up and write the next like million.. Hurry i'm waiting lol

GREAT!!!!

I HAVE TO AGREE WITH THE OTHER READERS. I WANT MORE.... CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER.

THANKS

Oh my...

I looooove it!!! I can't wait for more. It was absolutely amazing!

I swear some guys just post negative comments just to give u a hard time. But I liked it, I don't see anything really wrong with the story so far

Amazing

AA4F1mazing!