All Comments on '24 Hours to Live Ch. 02'

I hope you decide to continue it with more than 1 chapter. YOu still have the rest of the afternoon and evening to tell us about. Hopefully you will let us know who else he has revenge on as well as how he deals with the Mickey when them come to kill him.

More please.

Hot!

OMG your writing has me so damned hot! I am a stickler for good grammar and descriptive words...amazing job. WOW This doesn't even begin to touch on your concept - great story idea. Can't wait to keep reading & relieve the ache in my pussy. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

it makes me think of a few revenge schemes of my own.

I liked the scene against that countertop!

I absolutely LOVED the kitchen scene, I had to stop after finishing it and take care of myself!

I loved this story, very arousing and enjoyable, your writing style is fantastic, can't wait to read the next section.

1968

You have some outstanding writing skills like character development.

For just one small example: "All had been warned off of course, but Joel had been more subtle, succeeding in arranging a hot date without Mickey knowing."