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Stolen?
I've read this one before... did you copy and paste buddy?
It is not stolen.
This was published in the Nifty Archives a couple of years ago by the same author. It was awesome then and it is awesome now. Please write more, more, more. Not only is the author able to write but the storyline is such a turn-on.
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Why is this trash in loving wifes. Hey kid, wake up!
Wussy Wimp?
Hot to some but wearysome to most if - if this turns out to be a him watching like a self cuckolding scene while she gets filled up with a hemungus cock which he loves and ----
Well hopefully not a biGAY boyfriend - say why is this in Loving Wives? Is he married to him in his mind as it isn't her.
May not be a good start writer - we shall wait and see.
the people who attack my stories seem to be idiots
Hi, I'm the writer of this story. If cheating stories are not your kind of thing, then DON'T read my stories, OK? No one forces you to go to the Loving Wives section...which is the "CHEATING" section in literotica, OK? Everyone knows that it doesn't just have stories about married people....if you think my story is badly written (like the comment written below this one, apparently by an illiterate), or if you think I don't do well what I set out to do, then OK, give it a bad rating, OK? But I don't go into the incest section and give all the stories a "0" just because I don't like incest stories...OK, no one's FORCING you to read this, and you should rate it based on what it tries to do... it's SUPPOSED to be "mean" or "kinky" :)
I like your work,
not too thrilled with the attitude. People say what they are going to say..it's the way it is with opening up for public comments. We all get them. Keep going with the story though, it's not bad at all.
Written by a faggot!
Mindless and pathetic!!
WHO cares who wrote
Who gives a damn who wrote it? ITS well worth reading and ALL his stuff is good.
Nice start
I'm 20 and in college also and you really got the dialogue right. This is how me and my buddies actually talk. I haven't read anything by you before, but this first chapter really pulled me in. Now I'm on to the next chapter. Nice beginning.
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