Hot College Threesome Ch. 04

Even better....

I had read this somewhere else but its even hotter now!! I can wait for more chapters. So fucking hott!

Why Here in Loving Wives - Not even wimpy is

married to himself. Writer I think you want to fuck yourself proud but do it in the gay fashion you wish in that Gay Section not here - you offend normal people both gay and not with your disrespect and humiliation for humanity and yourself.

Grow up, leave and take your adoring humiliation gay crowd with you sweetie. Know your place little sick one!

response from writer

Of COURSE I loved my own story ;) But seriously, I love all kinds of comments, good and bad, never erase any, people should be free to say what they want, etc., etc. ...but are coherent English sentences too much to ask for? What's with the negative comment below...written by a foreigner or just a retard? Finally, would you mind judging my story based on its EROTIC merits, and not on whether it made you feel good as a moral person, or on whether it conforms with Literotica's category system? Let Literotica take care of that, guys...you worry about whether the story turns you on. Oh and don't write me bullshit about "uplifting humanity." This is a porn site for god's sake!!! I don't like incest stories so I don't read them...I don't read them, don't rate them, don't waste my time voting for them or writing to the author. Not my cup of tea. If you don't like those either, or if you don't like voyeur stories, then nobody's forcing you to read them. And if you don't like cheating stories, then don't read mine. It's simple.

Fantastic

Your stories of the wimp vs the Jock and the wife that watches and is the prize are just the best thing going on this site these days, and I LOVE them. Please keep it up.

i don't mind dave submitting to brad- cause brad is a great dominator- what bothered me was you having dave act/be such a spineless shit cause of his bitch girl friend. she had nothing he couldn't get from any girl-- and he could probably have any girl that brad didn't want- so for his whore of a girl friend to treat him so badly was horrible and didn't make sense in the dom/sub relationship he had with brad- i would imagine most readers who are into one guy dominating another were turned off by the female whore acting like she was dave's master- when it was brad. and you turned dave into someone who appreciated brad for his strength into a spineless shit who took orders from his girl friend- if anything i expected dave to become more aggressive with his bitch cause he had to be so submissive with brad- this isn't a 'three-some'- this is brad and a girl with a slave.

The previous Anon nailed it!

I hope he takes that bitches' ass because she's definitely got it coming.

Written by a pervert faggot !

"1*" !!

reactions to stories

Boy! A lot of hate and anger from a lot of these readers. Just the type of guys I would love to submitt to with my wife watching. Just think of all the degrading and depraved things they'd have us do! I think giving ourselves to them as their personal cock slaves is just what the doctor ordered for their attitudes. Love your stories Engine.

Everyday....

I really enjoy the power, control and humiliation aspects of your writing. For 4 years I took emotional and verbal abuse from a young 30-something female boss. And while my intellectual self told me that as a man I should not put up with it, her radiant youth, and yes, muscular toned body so intimidated me that I submitted. The general manager finally caught wind of what was happening and transferred her out of state, but everyday since I've longed to worship at the altar of her powerful self..FB68

By a girlfriend?

By a girlfriend? better than by a wife...But why did he need a girlfriend? Yeeeeeeeeeeessss, he being gay needed a girlfriend to get guys to fuck him, beleiving they were humiliating him...The others were the fools...

Great stories

It's not surprising that there are negative comments from those not into humiliation. Fortunately, based on your response posted here, you haven't let them bother you. Indeed you point out what should be obvious! If you don't like humilation stories don't read them. AND don't waste your time criticizing them.
I, being into humiliation (receiving it), understand (and fully appreciate) the psychology involved, even (especially) having the GF turn dominant. Hope you will keep on writing. Your audience may be small (pun?) but it exists.

so very hot

I so badly would have loved to be dave