All Comments on 'To Catch A Dream'

by sweet GA peaches

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Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
lovely piece sGp

really whistful and endearing,

you have some wonderful thoughts

in here that tugged at my

heart strings.

Well Done hun!

~ JC

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Let the child's heart beat,

take solace from its innocence;

from such risks of youth

come fulfillment and

completion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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yeah GA, this is sweet as peaches, but what is up with the "mine eyes?"

it makes me think of the battle hymn of the republic :) That is the only place I still hear that language anymore... just curious why you selected that word.

seattlerain

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a fountain of youthful

thoughts roam in and out of time loops...you paint the world in an array of fall colors...luv2Ufromtheblue....

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.

CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
Tugged at my heart strings too

You have a way with words. :)

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
sentimental appeal.....

gets a five spot......nicely done.....don

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