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wonderful.
i wish i could write like that.
Excellent piece
Loved this write SR,
very sensual and erotic.
You make writing look
so easy and effortless.
Really enjoyed this piece.
Nice work hun,
~ JC
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Love it!
With a mind like this
you can be anything you want;
Enjoy!
You ?
Rather nice, as expected, but I am confused be two "you"s. The first wants an "r" I think, and the second an "'re" or at least a comma does it not?
"for you attentions."
"You my always untouchable "
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Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.
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Well done. I can relate well to the sentiment.
I want to be your fan
could you change the words, a little and sing it to me, maybe it's me, the un's seem to undulate and make it unforgetable
YOU MAKE ME...
want to be in 20 degree weather, to chill this HEAT ... *winks*.... this is by far a most splendid performance of writing and thoughts, and prevoking thoughts.. and touching thoughts, O' my, I do believe it is hot in here.. I loved it ... every line, and it is un.for.get.a.ble. sweetest peaches to ya'.. sGp
versa
This is a good topic, men claim they would love to be women and would be sluts and then women want to be men...well that's your poem I enjoyed your write.
Strong, intense work
Powerful, lean, rich, and evocative. Very fine work.
favorite spot here......
I crave the opiate of your breath
that has brought strong men trembling
for you attentions. I want to feed
and feast upon your addictions.
*****
nice piece seattle......don
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