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To resort to a cliche: totally awesome!
This is the best piece I have read on Literotica in a long time. You definitely have a talent for the form of the short story - this is a tightly and cunningly crafted little package which is so well written that the language makes one's mouth water. The amoral and quirky voice it is written in is just perfect! Thank you for this totally satisfying story!
WOW!
I think you have touched quite a few raw places in the recent few stories, all well written, and all good!
Thanks
John
Perfect ending
It started off slow, but it quickly picked up. You have a definite talent for storytelling unmarred by the sexual focus of this site. Bravo!
Esoteric
I think. Well written, but a little past my understanding.
Hmmm...
I get the tale but is it funny? Interesting, but not funny.
No,
not funny, satire. TK
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