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A Different Story
It is however a great one. Well developed, superbly written, and a couple of nice little twists to really make it interesting. Yes there's love too. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Super
Very poignant and well written.
Boyd
Perfect
Incredible writing, wonderful dialogue, and a great story line make this another fantastic story from you. You are really on a roll.
Magnificent
If you ever stop writing it will be a monumental crime against humanity.
Very Good, Adrian!
I am sorry to have read it so late, all good comments have been made, I can only heartily agree.
Please continue to submit such well written and humane stories.
Thanks
John
:)
That one was lovely.. Thanks Yoron.
Wonderful
Isn't it wonderful that when love has depth and width and heighth to it then years or ethnicity or backgrounds so often don't really matter at all? You have shown that in vivid colors in this tale, Adrian! Thanks, for another wonderful piece of writing and storytelling.
Very Good. I am Impressed.
I read your most recent Sci Fi/Fantasy story, and even commented on it. I know in that one, I thought you came up short in some respects, but I applaud you on this one. This one was very well written. A good plot, a little bit of erotic, and romance rounded this story out well. Keep up the good work.
WOW
WELL fuck you in your progressive socialist/communist so damn smart leanings. there are 100 million dead in your name and if you get you fucking way there will be many more times that THAT dead to satisfy your wishes. maybe you might want to wake your DUMB ASS UP. the professors are WRONG. look at one professor from Harvard who espoused communism his whole fucking live went out to discover the perfect country that had been communist for generations. he found misery and fear...ZERO freedom. WAKE UP YOU STUPID ASSHOLE!!! Democratic ideas (NOT democratic party creator of the KKK and Jim Crow) and USA capitalism have enabled billions all over the world to end poverty and misery. NOTHING else has EVER worked, nothing is perfect and never will be but socialism has NEVER WORKED and leads to death in the millions.
HITLER
WAS A SOCIALIST not a right wing conservative you stupid dumb ASS!
@ Sampkyang
Before insulting other people you should check your facts,Hitler was a National socialist witch today is considered a fascist ergo fascists are considered extreme right wing ,like Mussolini,Franco or other Salazrs
Its just a story
Wow some folks get really worked up. Its a story, fiction, NOT real . lol
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