That was quite a story. Sweet and sad at the same time. I must confess that I got a little chocked up reading it. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort required to give us this story.
Why did you have to get me all worked up after Edna?
Again, Bravo! I cannot tell you enough that you are an excellent writer! I feel honored and privleged each and every time I read your writing. You actually make me feel like an amatuer. I am going to submit mine to you from now on!
Thank you again. I can only hope to find love like this in my lifetime. All I want to ask is that I get an autographed copy of your first book.
I am, it seems a hopeless romantic, I found this story so great, uplifting. As an aside it is excellently written, I can only hope, that your productivity will keep up, and we will be flooded with such good stories!
Thanks again
John
English
Poignant
That was quite a story. Sweet and sad at the same time. I must confess that I got a little chocked up reading it. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort required to give us this story.
Whew, what a story!
Man, I hate crying while I am reading a story. This is a truly romantic story of a lifetime of love. I feel blessed that I could read this story.
Thank you.
Good read
Thanks for a great story.
Damn you Adrian!
Why did you have to get me all worked up after Edna?
Again, Bravo! I cannot tell you enough that you are an excellent writer! I feel honored and privleged each and every time I read your writing. You actually make me feel like an amatuer. I am going to submit mine to you from now on!
Thank you again. I can only hope to find love like this in my lifetime. All I want to ask is that I get an autographed copy of your first book.
Timeless Love
It's short but it said everything that needed to be said and said it in an exquisite style. Thank You. Ronnie W.
It was very close...
I am, it seems a hopeless romantic, I found this story so great, uplifting. As an aside it is excellently written, I can only hope, that your productivity will keep up, and we will be flooded with such good stories!
Thanks again
John
A Dream Come True
A wonderful tale of a lifetime of magic. Thank You!
FANTASTIC
I love the erotica but this is basic, human, lovely, when's the first novel? Sounds like the framework for a great book.
Touching
Very moving.
Moving
My eyes are brimming with tears. Thanks for this piece. Hmm, when do I get a love like this one...?
Wow
The title says it.
Mere words?
Poetry. Pure poetry.
box of tissues
If ever there was a love story....This was it.
touching, poignant
and it is difficult to type when your vision is blurry
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