All Comments on 'Orally Inclined'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
"let's do it again!"

fabulous!!! more,more, and as your heroine said "let's do it again! soon! thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Um...

Ok, this time aside from the dialogue breaks, you also did the second worst thing: you capitalized words to emphasis them. Why not just use italics?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Um..

If she's on her back, wouldn't his balls be on her nose rather than her chin?

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