All Comments on 'Unraveling Ch. 02'

no problem being able to envision all the action and emotions but!!!!!. there are some unrealistic big glaring holes in the story. at least to me there is. you have got my curiosity up with her dream. will be looking forward to next chapter.

A good suspense story. You've got me hooked.

Please keep going and hurry. lol....I can't wait to read more!!

I had a crush on a girl in high school named Holly and coincidently, my name is Brandon.

These stories have put me on the egde of my seat anxious for the next installment.

Finish the story!