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A Lovely Fairy Tale
A good read if you enjoy 'knight in shining armour' stories.
Very nice
Great story, very enjoyable.
Good Read
I liked it and will look for more of your stories. Thanks
Like most of us
On the outside, aren't most of us ordinary? Thank you for a wonderful, heartwarming story.
good flow
very well written as well as entertaing to read.
Well written and very intense
Softly, your stories keep getting better and better. I really appreciate the way you can pack so much meaning into so few words while creating a scenario that pulls your readers into the story, letting them join in the scenes in their minds.
Thanks!
A good story -
- well told. Could have been a bit more erotic.....?
Lukas
Coulda been better
I really liked the lead characters but GEEZ, give them some time to fall in love. Love at first sight is one thing, but this was too fast. You could have really had a great story worthy of several chapters.
Sweet story!
A different and enjoyable mental trip. Good stuff!
good story
his father saw something in Ellen and just went with it. 5 stars kind of short and to the point
Ron
Too fast, too dumb
The "average" girl is going to take a stranger's dick and gift wrap it on the first night she meets him? And he's the bosses son? That's too far fetched even for fiction. Pretty silly.
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