A good read if you enjoy 'knight in shining armour' stories.
Great story, very enjoyable.
I liked it and will look for more of your stories. Thanks
On the outside, aren't most of us ordinary? Thank you for a wonderful, heartwarming story.
very well written as well as entertaing to read.
Softly, your stories keep getting better and better. I really appreciate the way you can pack so much meaning into so few words while creating a scenario that pulls your readers into the story, letting them join in the scenes in their minds.
- well told. Could have been a bit more erotic.....?
I really liked the lead characters but GEEZ, give them some time to fall in love. Love at first sight is one thing, but this was too fast. You could have really had a great story worthy of several chapters.
A different and enjoyable mental trip. Good stuff!
his father saw something in Ellen and just went with it. 5 stars kind of short and to the point
The "average" girl is going to take a stranger's dick and gift wrap it on the first night she meets him? And he's the bosses son? That's too far fetched even for fiction. Pretty silly.
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