All Comments on 'Our Shared Bathroom Ch. 02'

Hot again! Absolutely fabulous. Not quite as good as the first, but still excellent nonetheless.

Very sexy and well written

Very sexy and well written

Great character development, and the sex is very hot. I don't have a sister, but man, if I did.....

very, very nice, keep it up!

Give us another one . . . how about mom too?

THANKS FOR THE WANKS!

Well well done as was chp 1 please continue the story it can only get better.

So did those little fishies that went swimming into her eggs, mesh with one of them and start new life? We need more chapters of this one.

I lived in a house like this when I first moved out of my parents' house. I could only dream of something like this happening to me in that house, but you have captured my dream vividly. I hope that you will continue to add more to the story, including a rather "messy" situation.

Please continue with this amazing story. We need to know about the continuing relationship, the love and lust, and of course, the intense feelings and emotions from when those little swimmers met their goal.

That heck of story and pleasent story go go more ch. 3 and 4 so on in hurry if you can thanks crh

I need this to continue, I have imagined what could happen with more characters involved but it's not for me to tell you what to write. Keep it up - literally.

Excellent work dear keep it up and do complete the seqeal asap

The fat is in the fire now! Did he just empregnate his own sister? The story really s-s-s-sizzled. Chapter 3 soon?

- but a slow, hot story. The suspense is hard to bear, though.....

Lukas

Excellent as the first chapter. I love the subtly of the whole scenario. In this one, I really like the part of his penis at the entrance to her pussy. Excellent writing!

Incredible- I wish I could make some cute remark- incredible. If you write the actual fucking this good I am going to blow my mind

What can i say? My title speaks for itself. Oh my, please continue, you are really hell good..

One of the best I have read. Excellent. Keep it going.

Gj that was one of the best stories i have read on this site!!!

Just finished Ch 2. If the others are this good u should publish this

That was so good. One of the best stories! Keep the stories cum'in!

that was freakin sweet! just as great as the first one! keep em coming!

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Wow!!!This is even better than part 1! Very, very arousing!

apart from the obvious - that this story is very sexy! - you have an amazing style of writing! you explain and describe the situations and feelings, the special moments and also the moments of minor importance so well, that i can really imagine them! well done. i'd like to read a story that is not an erotic one - i'm sure you'd do really really well!

I don't normally like/read first person, but this series is excellent I will be reading more.

reading amazing writings like this is by far better than porn, and that weird cause im a guy, lol

OMG this is such a turn-on. i wish i had a sister like Jen!

Dude I'm not looking at this from a horny reader... I'm looking at it from a horny writer's perspective.... I LOVE your description... Your imagination is amazing. I love the way you can pull someone into the story... I hope you continue to write the way you do...

She didn't grab my dick and put it in on our first time but I did cum inside her. We both loved how it felt as it was both our first time. It's great to lose your virginity with your sister!

better than ch1,,very plausible story, can't wait to read more,,,its sun nite,its late,work early in the am,,can't stop reading and rubbing myself,,

You have talent and you use it well. Easy to give you the maximum vote

First 2 chapters were hot....but the rest was crap....incest is taboo treat it like it if you wan't your stories to be good

You write so well. But I think they got to the fuck a little fast. And unlike most of the readers I ask that she not be pregnant. A baby changes everything and I rather like their relationship the way it is.

Good stuff ! one of the best sister/brother stories I have ever read , because it shows exactly how this kind of stuff does happen .

Keep it up !

That was so HOT - got me so hard ! You really know how to write well, thank you !

Story was good and very hot I hope there are no babies (yet).

Great sequel to the first. Not only is it extremely arousing but this has great backstory perfect writing and I love a jokingly-normal feel of the whole story. You sir are incredible and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters

I have to say after reading this, all three of my romance novels cannot compare to this. You have a vivid imagination and that'll take you very far in the writing world. Drop me a line or two if you're interested! goforsnakedoctor@gmail.com. Again, great writing and great grammar. It was an easy read in reference to the "flow" of the story. Everything was natural and I cannot beat that!

Now that was a hot read, even hotter than the first one, you either have a great imagination or you have some first hand experience. Siblings do learn a lot from each other.

very well written, Almost like you are there

This was a great story but to fast a end please add a part 3

Oh hell I just had a terrific cum over chapter 1 and now I need to cum over this chapter. I am going to read and whack on the part where his cum surounds his cock in her vagina. be back in a sec. yep another great cum took a little longer and not as much but am letting it slime my hand and cock, feels sooooo good. will try ch. 3 now.

I never wrote comments on this website but I must say this story is absolutely so fantastic that it made me write a comment

I'm so turned on now LOL

I finally came after reading this story and now I'll read the rest to see if he got his sister pregnant! Here's hopin'!

definitely knows how to get what she wants.

great story and I wish I had a sister like jen to fuck fully like that as I think it would be very exciting and fulfilling

(Previous commenter) she sure is crafty,hehe ...and definitely knows how to get exactly what she wants! I only wish she had told me sooner that's what she wants so I could have gotten in her sooner and enjoyed ¥*SurroundSound*¥ sex from the get-go!! Lol ;). Fuck me, I wish I had a sister like that, hell I wish my wife was like that, lol. "Hey honey, you sure look stressed, why don't you just fuck me from behind here in the bathroom while I brush my hair!" Lol.

Any volunteer little sisters in north Texas? ;)

You know that Jen is only beginning to enjoy her brother's cock. There's nothing left to hide between them now. It's time to be a brother and sister with benefits!

"I felt more warm fluids pulsing from her womb onto the head of my dick."

It is IMPOSSIBLE for a dick, or a cock, to get anywhere near a womb, or a cervix, and neither of them could ever discharge "warm fluids" on ANY size cock, not even if that cock was three feet long.

Yes, there are other errors, like misspellings and left out words. You need one or more Editors to read your stories before you publish them.

Just a couple words…..OHHH SHIT!!

I mean the way you described the family, this would be like Ward Cleaver coming home from a business convention, to find June pregnant! And thereal kick in the head is that The Beaver is the dad!

Excellent but again, too damn short. 🙄 5/5

Too hot. 🔥