your series is entitle the awakeing of alicia so where is she? why didn't you pick up where you left off? this story was poor compared to your last one. the mother daughter sceens were good but would of been better if you had left the uncle out. i will never under stand why you writers insit on adding a guy to a girl girl sceen. at least you didn't have him in the girl girl sceens in the first one.
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Anonymous09/14/05
Wasn't sure where you were going with this
Wife #1 leaves him for another woman, so Wive #2 fucks his daughter. It could have been a Bad Karma story.
Brett, what a wonderful, wild, and wicked incestious web you have begun to weave. I can't wait to read what happens next... who's fucking who? Has 'Daddy' fucked Alicia? Or has he already, and we just don't know it yet! *evil grin* I can't wait to find out who's next!
I think you've slipped us right into a wickedly exciting world where most of us would like to be the character in the story. There is love and sex all around. It sounds like Alicia is going to change into a much more likable person and if Jim succeeds in his plan, you're going to have to do some wild writing to make it any hotter than where its gone so far.
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where is alicia
your series is entitle the awakeing of alicia so where is she? why didn't you pick up where you left off? this story was poor compared to your last one. the mother daughter sceens were good but would of been better if you had left the uncle out. i will never under stand why you writers insit on adding a guy to a girl girl sceen. at least you didn't have him in the girl girl sceens in the first one.
Wasn't sure where you were going with this
Wife #1 leaves him for another woman, so Wive #2 fucks his daughter. It could have been a Bad Karma story.
Wild and Wicked!
Brett, what a wonderful, wild, and wicked incestious web you have begun to weave. I can't wait to read what happens next... who's fucking who? Has 'Daddy' fucked Alicia? Or has he already, and we just don't know it yet! *evil grin* I can't wait to find out who's next!
How are you going to top this?
I think you've slipped us right into a wickedly exciting world where most of us would like to be the character in the story. There is love and sex all around. It sounds like Alicia is going to change into a much more likable person and if Jim succeeds in his plan, you're going to have to do some wild writing to make it any hotter than where its gone so far.
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