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another really hot one!
I enjoy most of your stories - you are the best writer on this site! Still looking forward to Kara and "Daddy's" next story!
Thanking You...
Angel,
I thank You for writing this story line, means a lot. Yoru mind flows so fluidly, it was and is a pleasure to read all Your stories, i hope ta hear from you soon.
domthesub@yahoo.ca
Great Read!
As a fan of anal I must say that this is an excellent story and that I truly enjoyed it.
KARA~the anal queen!
loved it-loved it-loved it!
you do know anal don't you babe!
sorry i have been outta touch for so long...I'll try to catch up on all your stuff!...
you're gonna win this thing!! ;)
kisses,Licks & slurps,
T
onc again you have done it
Bloody amazing... good to kow that you have so much talent.
Babe, i am gunna keep reading ALL your submissions because i know that you are a f***ing great writer.
I will keep read, and leaving little comments, because a talent like yours is amazing!!
Amba... the london girl
xx
Proceed!
To me, it seems that the story could do with a couple, (maybe even more), chapters, to fully resolve the plot. Wendy and Rob are sort of left in limbo at the conclusion; they would appear to have the potential of an interesting and sexy future... how about telling us about it? Does the 'Boss' character reeappear? Could there be others brought into the story; perhaps another waitress, food or beverage delivery guy, even a favored customer? Hummmmm?
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