by Pro_Ball_Player
Very well told - moving along gently. I could be impatient, but I'm sure it'll all be worth the wait.
And well proof read - no errors, so no distractions!
Lukas
Please daddy 1 and two have keept me wanting more, the story is captivating, not boring. It is writen well, creating good visuals and examples. I am looking forward to Daddy and Daughter confront their desires and urges. amples
This one is exceptional. Can't wait, the fantasy is well conceived and put to the pen!
No pressure - you have a lot of irons in the fire, but; speaking of can't wait,
Spanking Kenny's Wife?
Love your stuff........Dave
BTW. Enjoying the "stress relievers of the week"?
Hey that was a good story but the end of story sure cut me off . Was able to keep going to read more but it cut off.. crh
You are clipping right along in this story and I'm savoring it all! I'm very much looking forward to the "climax"! Great job by a great writer, thanks!
I write incest stories because I want to be loved by my daddy (it doesn't exactly have to be a "blood" daddy as is the case in this story). I read incest stories because I like to hear about other girls with similar prurient familial interests. This story reminds me of the time . . . oh never mind. I'll wait until I hear more. Please hurry with the next chapter!
Great lead up. Just right amount of suspense with promise of things to cum. She reminds me of my sister-in-law. I can't wait to "borrow" her panties in June.
Loved reading Dad's thoughts and desires, and it was a turnon with him totally naked wanting to show off to Kissy. Love how this story is progressing.
Seek and replace the word shit for shirt in one of the sentences, and a couple others correctly spelled but the wrong word.
I love reading all Daddy's secret thoughts throughout the story... his deviousness, and crafty nonchalence! He acts like a true pevert....and deliciously like one! The author is so good at giving us all the little details of how the Daddy plots and plans his next move. His mind works like mine, I guess!!!