All Comments on 'Daddy, Please Undress Me Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Daddy, please 02

Very well told - moving along gently. I could be impatient, but I'm sure it'll all be worth the wait.

And well proof read - no errors, so no distractions!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Keeping my interest

Please daddy 1 and two have keept me wanting more, the story is captivating, not boring. It is writen well, creating good visuals and examples. I am looking forward to Daddy and Daughter confront their desires and urges. amples

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love your stuff........

This one is exceptional. Can't wait, the fantasy is well conceived and put to the pen!

No pressure - you have a lot of irons in the fire, but; speaking of can't wait,

Spanking Kenny's Wife?

Love your stuff........Dave

BTW. Enjoying the "stress relievers of the week"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
aw jeeezzzz

Hey that was a good story but the end of story sure cut me off . Was able to keep going to read more but it cut off.. crh

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Just the way it SHOULD be!

You are clipping right along in this story and I'm savoring it all! I'm very much looking forward to the "climax"! Great job by a great writer, thanks!

sarahhhsarahhhover 18 years ago
You bad daddy!

I write incest stories because I want to be loved by my daddy (it doesn't exactly have to be a "blood" daddy as is the case in this story). I read incest stories because I like to hear about other girls with similar prurient familial interests. This story reminds me of the time . . . oh never mind. I'll wait until I hear more. Please hurry with the next chapter!

dennyboy2dennyboy2almost 17 years ago
Crissy =Lolita

Great lead up. Just right amount of suspense with promise of things to cum. She reminds me of my sister-in-law. I can't wait to "borrow" her panties in June.

NiceGuyInVaNiceGuyInVaalmost 17 years ago
Great Continuation

Loved reading Dad's thoughts and desires, and it was a turnon with him totally naked wanting to show off to Kissy. Love how this story is progressing.

Mark2Mark2over 16 years ago
time to proof read one more time,

Seek and replace the word shit for shirt in one of the sentences, and a couple others correctly spelled but the wrong word.

sassytxladysassytxladyalmost 14 years ago
Daddy's got hot rocks!

I love reading all Daddy's secret thoughts throughout the story... his deviousness, and crafty nonchalence! He acts like a true pevert....and deliciously like one! The author is so good at giving us all the little details of how the Daddy plots and plans his next move. His mind works like mine, I guess!!!

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