All Comments on 'There And Back Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful

Non-sentimental treatment of a subject fraught with sentimental foot traps. Very agile, Liar!

Fly

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
story reads like the salesman

leaving markings on the gate of every town...mind flows into the past in experience...blue

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
it seems to me.....

that this could be about cycles of humanity. and i like this spot:

A hobo sign,

here be answers

at the way station

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good images throughout the piece......don

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Well done ~

leaving markings

on each passing mind...

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