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Chantal's Clothing Becomes Her Toy

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by Anonymous10/23/05

You don't need to speak French to enjoy this story

Loved everything about this, pure and simple. The characters weren't obnoxious or repellant in any way. They had just enough development and it was very loving . . . and the descriptions of what he did to her, oooohhh. Beautiful, beautiful. My body is still humming.

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by Anonymous09/15/09

Almost as frustrating as her day

Why did you switch tenses in the middle of the story? It breaks the flow and honestly, ruined the story for me.

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