All Comments on 'Nightmare Lover'

by Recidiva

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
something else

A lot of hot sex and a cocky God with an arrogant human...makes for great fun. I loved it.

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Fantastic Fantasy

Seriously, I got tingles when I read this story. I loved how it made me feel not only in the beginning, but mostly in the end.... a true Fantastic fantasy...

~Honey

lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Fun

Recidiva,

great fantasy...very erotic...interesting characters...fun read.

My only complaint is joining different characters statements within the same paragraph. Would read a little easier if quotes are borken out on their own. But this a minor quibble.

Very good first effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oooooo!

What a fun ride . . . I mean read! JimDinMn

beaudazzlerbeaudazzlerover 18 years ago
extraordinary talent

what a fascinating story,dialogue spot on and plot line

absorbing,fantasy element erotic ...excellent

you have a real talent.

what gendre to present in/under for public consumption

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very impressed

with your imagination and ideas, your dialogue and discriptions. I had a small problem because I hate long paragraphs but besides that, this was a fantastic piece of work. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow!

That was amazing, I loved the descriptions and it was overall a very intense. Overall a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing!

AphroditesBelovedAphroditesBelovedover 15 years ago
Very sweet and sensual! Wonderful story!

Recidiva this was very sensual! I hope you write more stories! :)

SeallynSeallynover 14 years ago
Awesome

Wow...Recidiva. I loved reading this story.

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