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something else
A lot of hot sex and a cocky God with an arrogant human...makes for great fun. I loved it.
Fantastic Fantasy
Seriously, I got tingles when I read this story. I loved how it made me feel not only in the beginning, but mostly in the end.... a true Fantastic fantasy...
~Honey
Fun
Recidiva,
great fantasy...very erotic...interesting characters...fun read.
My only complaint is joining different characters statements within the same paragraph. Would read a little easier if quotes are borken out on their own. But this a minor quibble.
Very good first effort.
Oooooo!
What a fun ride . . . I mean read! JimDinMn
extraordinary talent
what a fascinating story,dialogue spot on and plot line
absorbing,fantasy element erotic ...excellent
you have a real talent.
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Very impressed
with your imagination and ideas, your dialogue and discriptions. I had a small problem because I hate long paragraphs but besides that, this was a fantastic piece of work. Great job.
Wow!
That was amazing, I loved the descriptions and it was overall a very intense. Overall a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing!
Very sweet and sensual! Wonderful story!
Recidiva this was very sensual! I hope you write more stories! :)
Awesome
Wow...Recidiva. I loved reading this story.
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