Escaped Cons Get Revenge

Longer

Very erotic but could have been a bit longer and it did not need the last paragraph. But keep on writing.

I love

Your work Angel...keep it up.

EXCELLENT !

Great visual's . Just hardcore enough . Good plot . This writer is obviously talented ! I look forward to more . Maybe a mother / son ,...Hmm ,...?

very hot

Very hot story. I too find the final paragraph unnecessary.

I Liked the last paragraph

Would have been better longer.

By the way, I love your stories. They get me VERY hot

wow

amazing, as always. :)

Good, but could have been better

They should have also impregnated her with either of their babies.

WOW

I have read all your stories plus your poems and your good do ya thang whew!

Yowza! All your stories are so very hot

Steamy and sexy.

Well...

The last sentence completely killed the rest of the story.

completely disagree with that one

the last line totally makes the story!!!! i wish i could get that!!

OH FUCKKKKKKKKKK!

I'm Cumming................

Last sentence a surprise

What a home run story until the end. It ruined the momentum.

Contrary to most of these comments...

I really love the ending.

Possible mistake, otherwise hot

In the beginning you wrote that this story was totally non-fiction. I surely hope that was a mistake, because it would be really sick to post a true story like this online. Non-fiction means true. I don't think that was your intent. Otherwise, the story was quite excellent. Of course, I think it could have been improved if you'd ended it before the cops entered, like something such as, "she heard the approaching sirens moments before she passed out from sheer exhaustion". Just a suggestion!

VERY HOTT !!!!!!!!

Loved it. The last line really made me go over the top,I was cumming so hard !!!!!! wish I was Officer Erin.




Joan @ the Jersey Shore

The ending...

it's all been said, I still revisit this story when a certain mood moves in. Great job. (Come back and write some more)

great story :)

great story :)... what happens next.... would like to know where u could take this story after the others show up...

love it

so great! but a cliffhanger, what happens next?!?!?!?!? dying to know, you have mad skills the way you write! keep it up =D

Um...

Your author's note says that this story is non-fiction. Non fiction would mean this is a true story. Just hoping this was an oversight.

My only comments other than it is an excellent story is Carl should have come twice and they should have used her mouth to get them hard for the second round.

wow

That was really good, but I agree the last line sucked. And you should have made them use her mouth, two guys one girl. You always have to get a lil oral action j/s

good story though the end ruins it

The last line runs against everything else the woman does... Please delete it or rewrite it so that it maintains the image of a strong woman.