All Comments on 'The Wild Side'

I can't decide which side I like better...

A fun, spontaneous poem!

Fly

I wasn't bored by it WSO! ;-) In fact I really liked it.

Yes I would say it has rough edges but I think to smooth them out would soften the impact of the poem.

Masturbate until her red made-up face

is covered with your creamy semen,

These two lines don't quite do it for me. Maybe...

Masturbate, muck up her red made face

Covering it with creamy semen (Hmm maybe I would just used the word 'spunk' but I think that is just british slang.)

b'brig

and it got my attention......good job.......don

you got it

and put it

right in this lil gem

you done good

this is most

excellent

I feel like I've been rode hard and put up wet.

ty,bd

Hey WSO. We've never had a conversation before, but I happened to come by the 100-word challenge, saw your avatar (is that the bra, or do they just fall like that?), and wanted to see some of your most recent work. Saw the glorious "E" and had to discover why.

It was well deserved, dear. Be well and tell all hello. I may come to the haven that is the Poetry boards from the poetic tundra that is my life.

average gina

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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