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Classic fantasy
Having the girl of your teenage fantasies return more beautiful and sexy than ever, then having the chance to be her hero, followed by the reward of fabulous sex? That's about as classic a fantasy as there is, and you carried it off beautifully.
Just one beef here...
Stereotyping is dangerous when it comes to stories like this.
Sexual stereotypes (like Asian girls being tight and black guys having huge wangs) are alright since it's erotica.
I didn't like how the stereotype about Asian parents being racist and her boyfriend being abusive, possessive and violent. I also didn't like how he was talking...
Seriously, Asian parents aren't as racist as they're always portrayed. In fact, they like white guys because they are usually well-off (and they find them good-looking).
Asian guys don't talk 17th century language. It's more believable if he was talking in street lingo.
Just thought you should know coming from an Asian reader.
Peace.
Re: Just one beef here...
I do not usually make entries into my own stories' comments but I felt it necessary to respond to this comment.
I agree that stereotyping can be and often is dangerous, but I think it should be noted that stererotyping may be read in something when it was not intended.
For example this story was written with thought of a particular individual with whom I had a very close friendship with in highschool which she did have to keep secret from her parents precisely for the reasons stated, I agree that many asian parents are very accepting of their children having white friends and even more, but there was this and at least four other friends (all female which I am not sure is just coincidence or a pattern) that had racist parents so I wrote the story in that manner not considering the steroetyping interpretation. It was simply a fact that the parents of the person I knew in highschool did feel that way about young white men, not to say that their attitude may not have been diferent in regards to more mature white men, or may have even changed entirely by now.
It was also not my intention for the problem boyfriend to be interpretted as a an asian stereotype for abuse, if anything it was intended as a short male stereotype as once again my real life experience has been that men that are shorter than me are frequently chauvinistic and agressive. It was my intent that the fact this charecter used the unusual language it was more noticable that this person was not what we as a society would consider 'stable'. I actually carefully stayed away from pegging this character with an asian nationally indicating that he was in fact mixed-blood.
I apologize if my story in anyway can be interpreted as being negative towards any nationality and it was never my intention, I merely wanted to put on paper a fantasy of mine about an old friend.
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