All Comments on 'Cori Tangled skeins'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
U R

a master of alliteration in this one..just a sample of style and bliss bordered with gold trim...always like to read your work... you inspire much....bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I like this but found the haphazard capitalization distracting. At first I thought it was a Dom talking about another Dom and his sub but then realised it might not be. There's absolutely nothing wrong with leaving the reader wondering, IMO. It's often a positive thing - certainly in this case.

You are one of Lit's secrets, a talent toiling away in relative obscurity, I noticed this.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hi

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem Review: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=14145021#post14145021

(already voted the number on the thermometer does not count)

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Seems to be a mix of multiple styles with a dash of alliteration and an odd mix of capitalization thrown in.

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