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Incredibly sexy story..........
I cannot believe just how hard and wet this made me. Thanks so much for the effort, and I hope to read more soon.
Very Good And Sexy First Story.
This is an excellent first story. Well written and very insightful. I hope we see more from you soon.
Great Story
Wow! That was an awsome story. It really turned me on and I masturbated twice reading it. Keep posting more of the REAL ones...
Another writer who can't...
write, spell, or used proper English.
erotic
The last reviewer needs to correct his use of the verb 'to use' before he worries about the author's writing skills.
Not a Story
This story, in fact, is not a story. It is a mindless collection of poorly written slutty activities.
Very hot story
Awesome story..don't listen to those other boneheads..I was also introduce to lesbian sex by an older woman...Keep up the terrific writing
This was written by a man!
I cant even read the entire entry because no lesbians except really scanky ones say things like 'nice tits' and no woman describe herself with 'pussy' and 'slit'... there were many other manly entries ... but I guess if there are no real women blogs this man-made one has to be all there is. Not real at all...
Very interesting reading.
Broaching a subject that is not often broached by women! Unusual use of language for a woman to use , but quite arousing. Hmmmm, I am thinking of possibly doing something like this. Thanks.
Eh...
It was decent until the pissing started
Holy shit!
Now that was the best submissive story I have ever read. Don't listen to all those people who have no idea what a sex story is. As a man i would like to say that turned me on so hard I jizzed! This lesbian storie is so fucking good it made me WISH I WAS A girl! Just so i could do this! My favourite part about the entire thing is when you get peed on. It is so hot i wish i was the one either peeing on you or being peed on. I absaloutly adored this entire story!
Incredibly erotic
While I had already experienced sex with another girl, it was an older, much more experienced woman who actually took my virginity. Reading this story brought back some very lovely memories when I submitted myself to her, penetrated for the first time by her strapon. I hope you write more!
Good, but...
The grammar is pretty horrific. Mostly punctuation, sentence structure, stuff like that. Makes it a bit difficult to read. Still hot, though. :)
wow
this sort of story makes me wat to have lesbian sex
wow what a hot story
very hot story
Damn!
Nice and nasty. Nothing beats dirty lesbians.
On what planet
do we not use "pussy" or "slit"? And I've personally got "nice tits" thank you very much. Please get your prissy head out of your @$$ ??? I wish Amysalez would write more lit that us real skanks can appreaciate!
ALMOST A FIVE STAR STORY
I gave four stars and would have given five but for the spelling mistakes. A really excellent story that could be improved by having it proof-read.
Good But...
It was a good read and very hot. But save the water sports for the Fetish section. Read the story you submit to make sure the sentences make sense. otherwise, excellent!
Great
Nicely written story. I've never read anything this good, easy A.
Hot Stuff
Phew !!! What a story, racy and had my cock hard all the watt through
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Wow I need a Catherine in my life . I been a lesbian for 4 years now and haven't found my master yet but I'm looking !!!
Mouth watering
Can't remember when I first read this, but I still remember how much I loved it the first time.
Still read it now and then and it's still as hot, though!
Well Done
I enjoyed reading your story. Well written, and so believable. Keep wrilting
Amazing!
What a wonderful story! Well developed, well written, pretty erotic and believable. The only little thing that bothered me is that if mother knew about her friend's lesbianism she would have, perhaps, warned her daughter at some previous moment of her daughter's life. But, as she accepted the relationship after a while, it looks like she is not against gay sex. But also not against dom-sub play? Is the mother also involved in such games?
Great story and well written. The only problem is that it could have been longer with more interesting adventures between these two, maybe even having the daughter seduce her mother into being a lovely lesbian and the daughters sub.
Should have continued your calling as a writer of very interesting stories.
Very sexy
This was so well described, I came in my pants every time I have read. An episode is very sexy. I would have been there with Amy and Catherin.
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