All Comments on 'How I Became a Submissive Lesbian'

by Amysalez

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Incredibly sexy story..........

I cannot believe just how hard and wet this made me. Thanks so much for the effort, and I hope to read more soon.

Landrious1Landrious1over 18 years ago
Very Good And Sexy First Story.

This is an excellent first story. Well written and very insightful. I hope we see more from you soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

Wow! That was an awsome story. It really turned me on and I masturbated twice reading it. Keep posting more of the REAL ones...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another writer who can't...

write, spell, or used proper English.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
erotic

The last reviewer needs to correct his use of the verb 'to use' before he worries about the author's writing skills.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not a Story

This story, in fact, is not a story. It is a mindless collection of poorly written slutty activities.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very hot story

Awesome story..don't listen to those other boneheads..I was also introduce to lesbian sex by an older woman...Keep up the terrific writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
This was written by a man!

I cant even read the entire entry because no lesbians except really scanky ones say things like 'nice tits' and no woman describe herself with 'pussy' and 'slit'... there were many other manly entries ... but I guess if there are no real women blogs this man-made one has to be all there is. Not real at all...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very interesting reading.

Broaching a subject that is not often broached by women! Unusual use of language for a woman to use , but quite arousing. Hmmmm, I am thinking of possibly doing something like this. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Eh...

It was decent until the pissing started

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Holy shit!

Now that was the best submissive story I have ever read. Don't listen to all those people who have no idea what a sex story is. As a man i would like to say that turned me on so hard I jizzed! This lesbian storie is so fucking good it made me WISH I WAS A girl! Just so i could do this! My favourite part about the entire thing is when you get peed on. It is so hot i wish i was the one either peeing on you or being peed on. I absaloutly adored this entire story!

Wildchick1977Wildchick1977about 14 years ago
Incredibly erotic

While I had already experienced sex with another girl, it was an older, much more experienced woman who actually took my virginity. Reading this story brought back some very lovely memories when I submitted myself to her, penetrated for the first time by her strapon. I hope you write more!

Archangel_MArchangel_Mabout 14 years ago
Good, but...

The grammar is pretty horrific. Mostly punctuation, sentence structure, stuff like that. Makes it a bit difficult to read. Still hot, though. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow

this sort of story makes me wat to have lesbian sex

sg789sg789over 13 years ago
wow what a hot story

very hot story

Marquis007Marquis007over 12 years ago
Damn!

Nice and nasty. Nothing beats dirty lesbians.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
On what planet

do we not use "pussy" or "slit"? And I've personally got "nice tits" thank you very much. Please get your prissy head out of your @$$ ??? I wish Amysalez would write more lit that us real skanks can appreaciate!

DryhillDryhillover 11 years ago
ALMOST A FIVE STAR STORY

I gave four stars and would have given five but for the spelling mistakes. A really excellent story that could be improved by having it proof-read.

NH_SissyGuyNH_SissyGuyover 11 years ago
Good But...

It was a good read and very hot. But save the water sports for the Fetish section. Read the story you submit to make sure the sentences make sense. otherwise, excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

Nicely written story. I've never read anything this good, easy A.

BloodthaneBloodthaneover 10 years ago
Hot Stuff

Phew !!! What a story, racy and had my cock hard all the watt through

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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Wow I need a Catherine in my life . I been a lesbian for 4 years now and haven't found my master yet but I'm looking !!!

4demi4demiabout 9 years ago
Mouth watering

Can't remember when I first read this, but I still remember how much I loved it the first time.

Still read it now and then and it's still as hot, though!

CAWJRCAWJRabout 9 years ago
Well Done

I enjoyed reading your story. Well written, and so believable. Keep wrilting

grangurugrangurualmost 9 years ago
Amazing!

What a wonderful story! Well developed, well written, pretty erotic and believable. The only little thing that bothered me is that if mother knew about her friend's lesbianism she would have, perhaps, warned her daughter at some previous moment of her daughter's life. But, as she accepted the relationship after a while, it looks like she is not against gay sex. But also not against dom-sub play? Is the mother also involved in such games?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great story and well written. The only problem is that it could have been longer with more interesting adventures between these two, maybe even having the daughter seduce her mother into being a lovely lesbian and the daughters sub.

Should have continued your calling as a writer of very interesting stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very sexy

This was so well described, I came in my pants every time I have read. An episode is very sexy. I would have been there with Amy and Catherin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mmm Ok

I'm a Guy and these are the kind of Lesbian stories I like. I don't like the strap-on stuff but all of the oral is very nice. I love eating pussy and having my women piss in my mouth unexpectedly while I'm eating them out. I don't think many guys don't like eating pussy now days anymore. I consider most lesbians as a bit naive. women who enjoy sex with other women should be at the very least Bi. There are some VERY PRETTY Sissies that love to worship women nowadays also so there really isn't any good reason to be a Lesbian anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sexy

This is a very sexy story with lots of juicy material. Love it 😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
How I Became a Submissive Lesbian

Great story but it needs a 3 things added:

(1) Catherine seducing Amy's mom & making her a lesbian sex slave

(2) Catherine blindfolding Amy's mom & making the mom eat Amy's pussy

(3) Catherine giving Amy's mom to Amy as her personal sex slave.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wow, good story.

I find age gap to be a very sexy thing already and the older woman also dominates?.. Pff. I like it when the older person takes control. So im also interested in domination (but not everything and i dont know how far).

Im not into the piss stuff and being called dirty names like that turns me off. BUT i still really liked and enjoyed the story and how wrote it.

I always love it when a story just sucks you in. It was a pleasure reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story too bad you didn't continue it.

Peace and good life.

BiCherylMomBiCherylMom11 months ago

Loved it. Reminded me so much of when I gave myself to a much older lady about 20 years ago.

I really hope that you write more about your experiences, and fantasies.

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