All Comments on 'Complete Examination'

by sxylilslut

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ooooo!!

HOT! Loved it! Please make him spank her - hard - in restrains!!! :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
If you don't

have a next chapter...I'll hate you for life. Damn, what every woman wants her ob/gyn to be like. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More!!!

More of this story; and more writings period.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
finally

oh my god!!!! finally...someone who knows what women think about with there feet in those stupid stirrups. So hot,,please write more of these...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
pathetic....no!

A 19 year old having a breast examination......well....I'm not american.....thank God for that......where I come from, we do get our breasts examined at that age....as a matter of fact, we regard ourselves as adults at that age!....and I think this is a nice little story....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
That's it!

To hell with lawyering! I'm going back to college to requalify in medicine!

barepussloverbarepussloverover 18 years ago
OH My God!!!! Hot, Hot, Hot!!!!

Sure hope there is more to this storyline!! Don't leave us hanging on too long. Thank you.

sxylilslutsxylilslutover 18 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Comments here and by email are greatly appreciated :) Thank you for the encouragement and tips!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thank you for an excellent story.

I'm sure that you are aware of all the loose ends. The young lady will likely be late on the 12th, requiring a spanking. Susan the receptionist is probably aware of the doctor’s situation, and interested in helping him out (or in, as the case may be). His wife might be more receptive now that the good doctor isn't quite so desperate.

I know I can speak for the majority of your audience when I we would love to read your stories about these, and other, possibilities.

CaptainJayAreCaptainJayAreover 18 years ago
EXCELLENT

I've read, and enjoyed, both the stories listed in your profile. Here, as in "Private Tutoring", you have set up the perfect begining to a great series.

Thank you, and please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well done

One of the best short stories I've read in a long time.

DJBlaxDJBlaxover 18 years ago
Excellent Work

Very taut and extremely sexy story. Nice stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Real Hot

To use an expression I know you have used in the past. I love intelligent people. Not only are you a slut in real life but you are beautiful and sexy and most of all very intelligent. There is nothing better than that! Keep up the good work, sxylilslut. I will look forward to more of your artistic and creative talents. Let alone your real life experiences. All the best, G. one half of the slut4us.

Gus AsparGus Asparalmost 17 years ago
delicious!

why, oh why didn't I take up medicine?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Thanks for the sexy little story, sxylilslut!

Even your sexy little nom de plume is a serious turn-on and the sexy little photo of your sexy little shoes! A feminine foot turned inwards means that the eternity-portal at the end of its thigh is provocatively resistant to admission of potential space-ship gametes and the all-important launching equiptment. The turned foot is in many of your lines which are rich in sexy little provocations. If you had written it by hand your pen would have been half-turned with a sexy little twist in it. You are a clever writer as well as your stories provocatively giving the impression that what is speaking is your own very naked sexuality. All very beautiful, sxylilslut! An exclamation mark (point)is a very phallic symbol; you could use more. The story is fun and I enjoyed it. After the provocative build-up, I would like to have had her fucked a bit more thoroughly though; she and the doctor seemed to have deserved it with a subtle element of more protracted (and protracting) punishment for all of her teasing; voluntary and involuntary, in the administration of the phallic strokes, as he made very detailed indelible clinical notes to be recorded near her essence deeply with his pen, writing with twists to it too, so to speak. And attendant to the fucking there should be flooding magical sexual sensations suffusing both of them to leave them illuminated like light bulbs, for example. The story and its readers should have its/their orgasm in words as well as the lucky characters in their tissue, minds and eternity-participation, I suggest. Sexuality makes every person potentially that important! It is too long since you wrote for us, and perhaps yourself, sxylilslut, please post some more soon. Lance

1Cosmolance1Cosmolancealmost 17 years ago
Thanks for your sexy little story, sxulilslut !

Thanks for the sexy little story, sxylilslut!

Even your sexy little nom de plume is a serious turn-on and the sexy little photo of you sexy little shoes! A feminine foot turned inwards means that the eternity-portal at the end of its thigh is provocatively resistant to admission of potential space-ship gametes and the all-important launching equiptment. The turned foot is in many of your lines which are rich in sexy little provocations. If you had written it by hand your pen would have been half-turned with a sexy little twist in it. You are a clever writer as well as your stories provocatively giving the impression that what is speaking is your own very naked sexuality. All very beautiful, sxylilslut! An exclamation mark (point)is a very phallic symbol. The story is fun and I enjoyed it. After the provocative build-up, I would like to have had her fucked a bit more thoroughly though; she and the doctor seemed to have deserved it with a subtle element of punishment for all of her teasing; voluntary and invuluntary, in the administration of the phallic strokes, as he made very detailed clinical notes to be recorded near her essence deeply with his pen, writing with twists to it too.... It is too long since you wrote for us, and perhaps yourself, sxylilslut, please post some more soon. Lance

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I really like the "slut" thing. I tell my bf to do that... but he has a hard time with names. Thanks for getting me off! :)

JaythedogJaythedogabout 15 years ago
You rock!

Hot! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Erotic

Nice story telling. I was in that room with you wanting to help the doctor. So discriptive and explicit. Keep it up and write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice one

Nice balance of detail,character backgound and of course the ever lovin slutty sex act!!!

I'm begging you doll make this one into an audio, my glasses kept fogging up as I read it ; P Whiskey 1965

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
tOp hOt st0ry

One of the Best med tales I have ever read! And so concise! Mind you; that with the gate now open, and the chance of all her friends turning up For Examination. . . As he went to put the exam glove on, dropping her name and the standards body in the same sentence. . Then as his rep spread, all ages, types, and conditions, turning up justifying a whole New explicit approach to Safe Sex practices. In a way to really impact with those who Need reminding. You could easily outdo War and Peace. 'Sex and MD'. Licence and franchise, agree to incorporate a spiced version of the Mills and B Medic Series and I would imagine you'd be there. It would rate a whole New Dept at the Uk's Private Universities. Imagine all 6th form pupils having your name on their minds! Police is overkill, everything was consensual with a sound minded adult, although the 21stC moral purists aim to out victoria victorian myth will no doubt press for charges. Led by that bunch of schizo rumps who pedal titilation to get people to swallow political capital shit, and use any unusual or indiscrete sex act to sell. Some might associate with the word Press or News, to which I can knowingly scoff at, and dream that the mental health acts will one day Be Health Acts. A minor side-track. Well done. I suspect there is a New Erotmedic Web Sex site there, maybe franchise Lit as well, and use the Sane stories that fit. The 'Sane' would exclude 98% other sites. Violence and force is unnecessary. Those that Need such will find it between the lines anyway. Establish your Copyright. Get comfortable.

Ribeye91Ribeye91over 8 years ago
Wish I was an MD...

Very well written, can sympathize with him as I'm going through the same as he is. I was cheering him on as he fucked her...

readymademilfreadymademilfover 8 years ago
Wish my MD was like him

Always have fantasized about being fucked by my doctor. You made me cum!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Incredible.

JUST WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What happened next ?

Did she go for PAP smear ? :D

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