All Comments on 'Our Daughter Moves Home'

Extremely hot story. Can't wait to read more of this family...

Very good story line she might meet a guy who likes that lifestyle

Loved the story. By the time, I got to the last page, my dick was hard and flowing like a faucet. More adventures to cum?

Great setup, good transition, and a superb payoff. I can give no better compliment than to say you made this story believable. Very erotic.

Five stars, even with a lot of mistakes - please use a proof reader before you post your future output.

Now that daddy is fucking katie she should tell him she wants him to father her child. Mom should encourage them to do so

Lovely story, made me feel really good.

Well done

Damn that was hot!!! Also, just a editing note, on the last page there is a number in the word fucking that shouldn't be there! Good job and I'll be added to your list of followers!!!

That was hot as hell. Chapter 2 please!!!

Love it

The word incest almost feels out of place. The story develops so naturally, like best friends discovering that they can be open about sex with each other and than acting on it. They just happen to be mother and daughter. There is no jealousy between the two women, just love and sexual attraction. Daddy is happily coming along for the ride, not pushing, not complaining, not complicating things. Well done.

...other readers (and writers) will react. Make no mistake - this is a VERY hot story. That said, with the number of people who seem to come to the site just to attack what they disagree with, I wonder how many hateful comments you'll get because of the taboo incest aspect. How many ever there are... ignore them and keep on writing!

wonderful story i loved it so hot are you going to write another one where the mother and daughter both get pregnant one has a girl the other has a boy then 20 years later it starts again {WoW}

This line of text made me laugh out loud.. I was so damn funny ..

"Obviously not, " she said. Then to the tune of the children's song 'head shoulders knees and toes' she started singing, "Mouth, my hair my face or tits, face or tits, Mouth, my hair my face or tits, face or tits,"

Damn!! That story had me hard from when she came home to when she finally shared her father and mother! Keep up the good work.

Loved the story! I’d love to hear about daddy getting daughter pregnant, and the wife too. The daughter would continue to live at ho e and wind up with several babies by her daddy.

Chapter 2 would be nice.

hope u write more soon

here is a second vote "wonderful story i loved it so hot are you going to write another one where the mother and daughter both get pregnant one has a girl the other has a boy then 20 years later it starts again {WoW}"

ONLY CAN DREAM OF THAT HAPPENING!!!!!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN AND WOULD LOVE TO HEAR MORE!!!

i ad to give it five stars, as this is the first story in a long time I had to get relief before the last page. thank you

You are a very good writer. Someone mentioned proof-reading, but I didn't see any errors, although I did notice the number 8 as a letter in one word. I loved how you gradually increased the sexual tension. The parents talking about how hot the daughter is, and she listening in, is a very good device.

The one part I didn't like is that on the 3rd page the daughter comes out too directly asking her dad to fuck her. That took away from the gradual tension you had been building up. I would have liked the daughter to keep doing increasingly naughty things. For example, while they are all watching TV she sits across from them and gradually parts her leg to display her scanty panties. Then the next evening she 'forgets' to put on the panties. The day after that she comes and sits between them, and puts her feet on the sofa, so that her naked cunt comes into view.

Then Katie asks the mother to scratch an itch near her thighs while the father is looking on. After that Katie asks the father to rub her other thigh which is also itchy and begins to moan as the father's hand nears her cunt.

Eventually they do all fuck, but the daughter doesn't come out and ask to be fucked. The intermediate steps I have mentioned would take up one extra page, but the erotic level of the story would keep getting higher. I would add that there should be some ass-licking in the story, for people like me who get off on that, especially Katie licking her mother's asshole and vice versa.

Anyway, I will conclude by saying that while some additional steps would make the story more arousing, it is pretty arousing, and well-written, as is.

Great story. So hot and lots of detail. Keep it up and keep it juicy!

Great story and well told. Looking forward to hearing more adventures

This one is well done. I hope to read more of their exploits. :D

Great story.

I gave you a 5* but wish I could have given you a 10. What a great fucking story. Being a lover of incest, this story hit a 'home run' with me. I loved it when the daughter watched them and really loved it when she got involved in their sex games. I would like to see more of this family having sex together.

Really Hot!

That's a family I'd love to be from! Or simply watch.

So nice to read a long time fantasy of mine, and am sure of others, Well written, the story line, and very descriptive sex passages.

No need to state what my right hand was doing, as my left, scrolled the pages.

Have to admit, the scrolling slowed down, during the sexual paragraphs.

definitely a real pleasure.

Just happy my cock can stand up, to this kind of usage.

And a bit sad, I'm in between lady friends, so for the present, it's self service at home.

But nice to recall some kady friends,m who were this open with our love making.

Noting the vast collections of stories waiting to be read, and am looking forward to going through them all. Assuming my cock can handle all this pleasure.

OMG

I was dripping through out ,but at the end I couldn’t hold back

Stimulating, provocative, naughty, taboo! Nothin’ else to say. I loved it. 5 stars.

Stimulating, provocative, naughty, taboo. Nothin’ else to say. Loved it. 5 stars

Must be DejaVu...but I am certain I have read this story before!

I love sexy stories--especially happy ones like this. So jealous of this family!

Thank you!

The author mentions in their intro where they are on the “most followed” list. Can anybody clue me in as to how to view this list? I’m always looking for content from other authors and the most followed list seems like a good place to start.

The bar has been raised! Looking forward to your next story.

I love the way you write. Please, keep them coming..... :)

Very nice. I thought the pace of escalation was especially good: not unnaturally fast, not belabored and slow. As Baby Bear once said: "Just right!"

I love your writing. In this story I saw a recurring problem with “your” and “you’re.” Not a big problem but something to keep in mind.

Great story, as always, with more early action than usual for you. I suspect it's not your thing but I think both mother and daughter - and Dad -would enjoy anal. Maybe Katie could introduce her parents to the pleasures - she plainly has the ass for it!

Adult consensual sex, even as you describe it

Looking forward to part two.

Looks like the daughter has a job, taking care of her parents.

And who gets pregnant. surprise or planned ?

Great story, both me and my girlfriend are eager for a sequel. Maybe throw some anal play in there and the daughter should ask to get knocked up and keep fucking them through the pregnancy.

You are a great author. Fantastic stories very kinky

A slower build than I prefer, but the payoff was both sweet and loving, and hot 'n' dirty :-)

AWESOME story! I thought the progression was just right.

Daughter should have been brought into parents sex play earlier and I thought the end was a bit rushed. Like a virgin's bras it needed more padding.

EXCELLENT buildup and very sexy. Would love to see this continue!!

I loved it all. you made things happen at just the right pace. You ended it perfect and left the story open for another chapter as i certainly hope you do.There is no way i could put the storey down after i started to read it.

Need more stories like this. Keep up the good work.

good read. Please keep writing.

there is room for another chapter. please continue.

Wait til Katie starts bringing her G friends home. lol.

And she's sitting here with us now. We've been fucking again after reading your hot words! Keep up the great stories! Maybe a sequel to this one with everyone drinking and starting slow on the couch watching TV. Mom starts talking so dirty about us fucking her that we can't stop!

Love and kisses,

Dave, Sally & Katy

Oh damn, you did. A little light goes off for me every time I read how some author has his female character shave off her crowning glory pubic hair. Seems almost required in stroke stories these days. Oh well.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

i have to admit,,, less than half way in I was positive the daughter was going to be going at it with you guys.... now back to the story list to see if i can find some more,,, hope to see a follow on to this before the daughter moves to her own place,, bet she has some hot friends that mom and dad would enjoy,,,,, by the way,, who is the author,, mom or dad...

no matter,, the sex is hot,,, and tastefully and seductively well described

Oh, my fucking goodness! My wife of over 50 years, and I just finished this. WOW!!

Another home run from one of my favorite peers and best Authors on Lit.

Good job, Imstillfun. This was hot from the get go with perfect pace, fantastic dialog and sizzle that plays like a quality porn film in my mind. ; )

My favorite part was mom and Katie making eye contact and both cumming as a result, as did I.

Thank you for your time and talent. Keep on.

Writerotica (retired Lit author)

Absolutely fucking loved it! So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

I love your work. I feel an abundance of love regardless of the genre. I missed this story so reading it was a real treat. What’s more the incest was natural, nothing creepy.

Really hot story thank you. Great way to start the day.

After reading this I have to follow you for more hot erotic tales. Love how the parents rediscovered each other and with maturity there came better and better sex. No wonder daughter wanted some of what they had. It was fun, hot and so arousing.

A good read, though the quality of the scenes suffered due to the quantity in such a short amount of space.

Very nice. Felt natural and loving. A sequel about making their first grandbaby would be a great follow-up, but even better would be to first develop the straight and gay 1-on-1 relationships. I would love to see a future where the daughter becomes a second wife for him and a gay wife for her while keeping the strong original marriage solid. Follow up with new babies for both of them.

Favorited and gave you five stars.

Great story I love it when both parents are involved I think it's so much hotter.

Another great story. Thank you.

Mother daughter stuff is becoming one too many and stale. Sorry

Remain your admirer.

A great story . Build-up was excellent . Lucky dad getting to fuck two ladies , both of whom clearly love him , and his cock . You could make a good series out of this , as they all explore the possibilities of really good recreational sex . Please write more .

Good story. You over used the word hot but other than that it was a very good story. Nice slow build up of sexual tension in the house made the final scene, that we all knew was cuming, even better. For me it didn't hurt that the daughters name is Katie and the dads name is Dave. You see my name is David and my youngest, and most beautiful, daughter is named Katie. So very good fantasy fuel foe me. 5 stars

I really enjoyed the teasing aspect! Such a naughty read as the daughter shows and expresses her curiosity about their sex life. I enjoyed how mom was the influencer as well. Would love a part 2! Great story!

This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. The plot was natural and the outcome inevitable.

I have read many of your stores and loved most of them. They have become better than videos because you put so much work into developing the plot;.

I especially love your slut stories and you have become my favorite author. You make it possible for me to experience my fantasies knowing that the only place they will happen is in my mind. Thank you!

♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Not usually into incest but that story was hot!

Another gem! I love Katie's little fashion show, and the moment when she slips out of those pants in the kitchen to rub her pussy while mom meets her eyes and swallows dad's cock in front of her...

5 stars all the way! God, hat was hot

Great story - would also have loved to hear another version from the Dad's perspective...

The build up in this story was great.

Thank you for sharing,

Incredible.....!! *5*

WOW !!! SO HOT!!. I was edging the whole way thru it !!!

Terrific story. Good read.

Let's see, I usually don't care for Incest stories but here I am loving this one. I almost never like a cuckold story and earlier today I found myself thoroughly enjoying one of yours. Hummmmm, could it be the storyteller's skill rather than specific themes that I like so much? Maybe broaden my reading range without preconceived opinions? Yeah, I think so.

I would have ask her when she got home to join in .she wanted daddy's cock and .oms pussy too

Two women licking each other man with cock in his hand I would have been fuckung the both of them

I have read thousands of stories over the years. "I BELIEVE THIS IS THE ABSOLUTELY HOTTEST STORY I'VE EVER READ" While reading it, in my mind I could actually picture myself both watching and sharing in ALL of the sexual acts being performed WITHOUT any limits, and not wanting it to end, until everybody couldn't even move!!!!!!!!!!

More, please!

What a delicious tale - and how beautifully you tell it! Thank you!

Kisses galore

Sarahxxxxx

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!

Thank you.

I never had any daughters just sons, now I wish I had one daughter and a wife that joined in. Fantasies abound when thinking about family. I enjoy your stories and think of myself being the male lead,

So hot, love the threesome of mom, dad and daughter. Love to read more of those.

I loved it! It's a real shame you're not writing anymore (at least not here.)

Thank you.

Gawd, what's not to love about this absolutely HOT story? Please, please do your fans a favor and pick up you pen for more of the same . . . .

This was especially hot as it reminded me (in hindsight) of some of the hints my ex-wife made about her teenage daughter. If she hadn't been quite so crass in going zero to 60 in five seconds, we could have explored this idea more. Two opportunities: three of us in the spa, and step-dUghter started talking trash about skinny dipping - her Mom and I both quickly went 'there' and teased her. I tried to intie bikini knot and she freaked. All talk...

Another great story. ★★★★★ These are also characters that deserve a follow up.

You haven't posted anything new for a while... I hope you are well.

threesome was very sexy

Please do a follow up story

Again your writing style impresses. The sexiest incest story I have read.

A very erotic story, very well written.

Excellent great reading and loved the slow build up to all being together

I wish there was a way to rank my faves. This would definitely be a Fave fave! Very hot, sexy and delicious! Thank you.

Thoroughly enjoyed

Amazingly hot and erotic story. Was great that it was written from the mums pov, who seemed to be the main instigator of this whole scenario.

Another chapter or two would have been great, but this stands on its own as a beautifully sexy piece - and works wonderfully as wank-off material!! 💦