All Comments on 'Opulenzia Ch. 02'

not good at all

You are an excelent writer hon, Do not listen to all of the negativity, they dont understand the glory of meaty women

The story is really good, The writing is really good and the subject matter is just what i like. I hope you plan to finish it.

While I do not approve of the incestuous nature of this work of fiction, I must say that nobody paints a picture quite like you. What a first-rate erotic prose!

Excellent work! Hope to see more of this soon!

One question, though: exactly how tall is this woman? Hips over 100 inches across translates to over eight feet across.

Both chapters just kind of leave me with blue-balls because for all the imaginary stuff that goes on, NOTHING ACTUALLY HAPPENS between the two characters. Even worse, this is ONLY two chapters and that's it (even though it seems to hint at a third chapter at the end [maybe?]) Basically, I like your style of writing, but I REALLY wish there was an actual payoff instead of the dude just jerking off alone at the end.