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parts of this are impossibly good. Your art is growing as we speak... Keep it up!!!

QP

for your E...am so happy for your work to get honored as you are a very good poet..and now you can write freely ...all that pent up sensual pleaure work you muse has been waiting to release...nicely done Angel...luv2ufromtheblue

I was with you all the way on this one. Liked the style and the message. Reading more -- keep it up.

The dream lover speaks

sitting triumphantly astride

her night's delight

and then she is gone

~

and running off

with a nice pretty E

shining in green

well done

a wonderful ride.

f.

a few cliches but enough good stuff to make up for it.

Bored!

thats the way most women leave us !

cleaver; very cleaver.

Hey, congratulations on the E, it was well deserved. I was sitting here trying to think of something cliched and boring (I don't know about you, but I work very hard at being both boring and cliched) and you will never guess what I came up with. Give up? It could be nothing else but anonymous rude comments.

Yawn

Sweet Ga this one is slow n Dreammmmyy ~~~

I love the imagery, very good phrasing and I the buildup

is great.

Keep'm coming, we grow as we write, and YOUR writng

* speaks * to the reader. Honored to be here with ya ~!!

* Yellow Roses * for the E,

and Hugs to hang'in there. * Smiles *

I love it !!

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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So nice to find such an erotic poem with a breathtaking beauty of imagery. For once I could agree with the "mad grener"...