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Perplexed
Not sure what to make of it all, still thinking. That alone made it worth reading.
Nicely done
As a Hunter, I know that writing humor is the most difficult thing so it demands my respect. When it is as fine as this, giving respect is easy to do. My forehead is on the floor to you my gifted colleague!
Please continue to post, it is needed.
BBH
Well now, is there a flaw?
The hunter kisses just the string before the release. In fact, he pushes the ‘bow’ away from his body...lol
Good story though.
My best wishes
My humble apologises
My scoring below, of course, should be 100%
I overlooked moving from the default.
allegory wake up and smile
you do have a fascinating creative process,love the way your mind works,delineation/definition maybe needs a little more work but the bones are wonderful.
thankyou
Very creative
I love your style. Very well done.
If there is one criticism it is that there is a lot of material there and I kept feeling that I jumping from one perspective to another. Maybe you could elaborate one (type of hunters) and drop others. Or make the story longer?
Still, it is one of the best pieces of writing I have read.
Outstanding work !
I like the way you think !
Wonderful...
started with smirks and eye rolling, ended with guffawing and lots of nodding! Once I was tracking with you (my shortcoming not yours!), I was thoroughly entertained, thanks!
Yeah
That was pretty funny actuallly--took a while to get going, but really good. Good job.
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