by sweet_katrina579
because it was well written. delivery was good. balance good. a little lengthy for the message. i hope i got the message. in real life, it would be a very foolish way to learn a lesson. we accept at the end, that her husband was cheating on her. she did all this in the beginning tho with very little evidence presented to prove he was cheating. i kept thinking, she's going thru all this over an unopened pack of rubbers, a perfume smell, and a drunk husband who doesn't answer his phone. i'd sure need a lot more, unless i was into pain.
Very well written. The moral of the story, for me anyway, is that you can get caught up in all sorts of things after you take the first step. She set out on a specific mission and it went full circle. Beware of taking that first step.
Rather sad to feel that way about life. This story has a seriously melancholy feel to it. Well written about an unsatisfied life.
and painfully honest tale. Delighted to find this amongst so much dross on Lit.
If little scottie boy liked it I know its a pile of shit, no thanks.
Very good story up until the last chapter. It is out of place and doesn't fit. Everything else was perfect.
That married men looking for some action on the side aren't all hot and good at sex like most stories here claim to be and that they don't always end up feeling like God's gift to women by having extramarital affairs. Not to mention, revenge fucks won't automatically get you laid with people better-looking and better at sex than your own cheating partner.
I gave this story only 4 stars because I feel that you could have actually made a second chapter or if not then extended this one. the story was pretty good although, I would have enjoyed reading more about it. Like, maybe she could have done it again and got a video of it just to show it to her wayward husband. then file for the divorce. and then for her to find out that he never cheated. therefore, she whored herself out for nothing. but as I said it was good reading anyway.
She lowered her standards and made herself to be a whore. How is that revenge? There are better ways to get revenge than make oneself into something that dirty.