All Comments on 'The Mail Order Bride'

by Silverstag

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A Delightful Read

A thoughtful, warm, true to life story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What A Mail Order Bride

I love the stories with a plot to it. This is a wonderful story! How about another chapter, your characters are delightful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful!

What a wonderfully-told story! And well-written. Good characterization, not just cardboard cutouts (as is too often the case here).

One teeny tiny inconsequential whine from me: X-words weren't invented until 1913, first appearing the the New York _World_.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Delightful

I enjoyed this story and Wagons Ho very much.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful!!

Your story happens to be about the best erotica that I have ever read! A truly magnificent story of love and passion between two wonderful people. You are a superb storyteller. Thank you for sharing this wonderful adventure!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well Done!

Well written story with believable characters and excellent eroticism. The only distractor was the carriage, which seemed as through it was motorized. In the 1890's Kansas, I doubt they had horseless carriages. They did not have them in Nebraska until after the turn of the century. But that is a picky comment on an otherwise superbly written tale. Keep up your excellent writing and let us read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thought Wagons Ho couldn't be beat

But I was wrong. You are fast becoming a favorite of mine. You have a way of writing an erotic tale that is a masterpiece of using the Engliah language in the way that it should be used. Your erotic scenes are wonderful and even while in the throes of ectasy you find a way to inject humor without losing the eroticism of the moment. Thank You. Ronnie Wachuka.

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
Magnificent!

I must agree w. Ronnie W, You are a find, one of my new "to be watched" authors.

The historical setting of this and Wagons Ho are that of the great times of the US, I think you should be proud of the good parts of those times, and this is a good way in my view.

I also wouldn't mind a second chapter for this and Wagons Ho!

Thank You Silverstag

John

oldwayneoldwayneabout 11 years ago
A nice little tale...

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
what a delightful lesson in love

they were fortunate to find each other. we are equally lucky to have this lovely story to read.

juanviejojuanviejoalmost 7 years ago
Cinco Estrellas!

Very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved it. I would look forward to reading continuations.

jntiquesjntiquesabout 3 years ago

Dear Author, I have read all of your 19th. Century based offerings and found them to be delightful, erotic, warm,

sweet, error free, pleasant, well written, informative, historically accurate and fun to read. Thank you for the selection and for the simple writing style. I have truly enjoyed the time spent on your stories and look forward to reading the balance of your works. Thank you, jntiques/john

jntiquesjntiquesabout 3 years ago

Dear Author, as an aside, why is there no recent offerings? Would welcome more and wonder if something untoward has befallen you? Best wishes, jntiques.john

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